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Template-protected edit request on 30 June 2020

This edit request to Template:Request edit has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request.

Please add the following after the pblock line for when a non-blocked user adds the {{Edit partially-blocked}} for the requester.

|user = {{{user|}}}

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reply to|Can I Log In}}'s talk page! 22:16, 30 June 2020 (UTC)[reply

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In addition please change the following

   |ADV = Some or all of the changes may be promotional in tone.
   |V = Some or all of the changes weren't supported by neutral, independent, reliable sources. Consider re-submitting with content based on media, books and scholarly works.
   |O = The suggested edits are good, but the reviewer felt omissions in the content may create balance issues.
   |R = The changes suggested removing content that is well-cited or where sources exist. Consider re-writing, instead of deleting, bias content that needs to be written neutrally. 
   |D = The reviewer would like to request the editor with a COI attempt to discuss with editors engaged in the subject-area first.
   |A = The reviewer requests that the COI editor implement the proposed edits directly.  
   |S = The request was not specific enough. You may consider leaving your comments on the Talk page or escalating significant issues to the [[Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard|conflict of interest noticeboard]].
   |T = A reviewer felt that this edit would not improve the article. 
   |C = A consensus could not be reached.
   |#default = {{{2|}}}

Now replace with the follwing

   |ADV = Some or all of the changes may be promotional in tone.
   |V = Some or all of the changes weren't supported by neutral, independent, [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. Consider re-submitting with content based on media, books and scholarly works.
   |O = The suggested edits are good, but the reviewer felt omissions in the content may create balance issues.
   |R = The changes suggested removing content that is well-cited or where sources exist. Consider re-writing, instead of deleting, bias content that needs to be written [[WP:NPOV|neutrally]]. 
   |D = The reviewer would like to request the editor to discuss with editors engaged in the subject-area first.
   |A = {{#ifeq: {{{pblock}}} | yes | The requesting editor is no longer blocked and can edit the article directly|The reviewer requests that the COI editor implement the proposed edits directly.}}
   |S = The request was not specific enough. You may consider leaving your comments on the Talk page or escalating significant issues to the  {{#ifeq: {{{pblock}}} | yes |appropriate [[WP:Noticeboards|noticeboard]]|[[Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard|conflict of interest noticeboard]]}}.
   |T = A reviewer felt that this edit would not improve the article. 
   |C = A consensus could not be reached.
   |#default = {{{2|}}}

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reply to|Can I Log In}}'s talk page! 22:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)[reply

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Partly done: I've implemented the second request, but not the first; please get a consensus that your proposed change is necessary. Primefac (talk) 23:45, 30 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Template-protected edit request on 4 August 2020

This edit request to Template:Request edit has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request.

I am submitting the following changes to ensure the article is accurate. The information that I am submitting can be verified by any independent person. Here is how the article must appear to ensure its accuracy:

Manhattan Village Academy was founded in 1993 by Mary Butz, a 25-year veteran of the

New York City Board of Education. Butz was invited to establish this new small public high school by famed educator Deborah Meier, who worked closely with Ted Sizer and the Center for Collaborative Education. After selecting the site in a commercial loft building in the Chelsea district of Manhattan, Butz persuaded nationally known architect Beverly Willis to collaborate with her to design the space for the school. Butz recruited the students and faculty and shaped the culture of the school around the ideas of "reason, respect, and responsibility." The motto of the school from its inception was "a good school dedicated to the liberal arts." In the first graduating class, every student went on to attend college. The school was recognized by Chancellor Rudy Crew as one of the best high schools in the city and was regularly ranked among the city’s best public schools under Butz’s leadership. She maintained policies of open enrollment, project-based assessment, and close attention to punctuality and student deportment. When she left the school in 1999, she selected Hector Geager to succeed her. He introduced a series of innovative educational approaches; such as 7 Critical Thinking Authentic Performance Based Portfolios, 26 Critical Thinking Units--one per teacher twice a year, Success Units, Curriculum Mapping, High Performance Teams, School Uniform, an Internal Accountability System, a Critical Thinking Summer Academy, PM School and Saturday Academy and an open Advanced Placement Program with over 17 AP Courses, among other educational changes (See the School's Comprehensive Educational Plan--CEP--from 1999 to 2019). Mr. Geager continued the progressive work that Ms. Mary Butz began based on her philosophy of reason, respect and responsibility. Under his leadership, punctuality and attendance were expected, as part of the school philosophy. Admissions also became selective due to the thousands of parents and students that wanted to enroll in the school (See the high school student applications breakdown for the school and check with the Office of High School Admission). Since 2004, Manhattan Village Academy became one of the top schools in New York City, and every year was recognized by US News and World Report among the top schools in the city and the nation for minority students (See US News & World Report's School Ranking starting in 2004 and the State Department of Education school designation and recognition for closing the achievement gap). By 2018, it had reached a 100% graduation rate, a 98% college readiness index and a student attendance rate of 97%. From 2014 to the present, Manhattan Village Academy became the school with the highest impact and performance in New York City (See the DOE Dashboard). Mr. Geager retired in February 2020 due to a medical condition. In September of 2019, Christina White became interim principal of the school and was appointed principal of the school on March 11th, 2020. Hgeager (talk) 07:57, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply

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Not done: this is the talk page for discussing improvements to the template {{Request edit}}. Please make your request at the talk page for the article concerned. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 09:46, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request edit wizard

I've noticed a lot of editors create malformed edit requests, either in wording, technical format, or both (see above). Because of that, I created an edit request wizard. Do other editors think it would be useful to link to it on the template documentation to encourage new editors to use it instead of directly using the template so there is less of a chance they mess up? Sam-2727 (talk) 00:59, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Can't hurt, but you can't fix stupid. Primefac (talk) 01:00, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This template name is inaccurate and confusing

Why does this template have the generic name "request edit", when its wording actually amounts to "request edit but the requester has a conflict of interest"? That makes no sense. The "how to use" instructions here don't even mention or deal with the COI assertion which is part of the template. IMO this generic name should apply to a generic request - basically usable as a synonym for {{Edit semi-protected}} or equivalent. There was recently a user who included this template, {{Request edit}}, as part of their own talk page edit request, causing considerable puzzlement as to just who had accused the person of COI. We replaced it with the "Edit semi-protected" template which was clearly what the user intended. I doubt if this is the first time that someone has been confused by this title. Can we create a separate template for "requested edit by a COI user," if one is needed, and let this template's wording simply say the equivalent of "this is a requested edit"? -- MelanieN (talk) 18:58, 30 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 4 February 2021

It is requested that an edit be made to the semi-protected redirect at Template:Request edit/doc.
(edit · history · last · links · transclusion count · protection log)

This template must be followed by a complete and specific description of the request, that is, specify what text should be removed and a verbatim copy of the text that should replace it. "Please change X" is not acceptable and will be rejected; the request must be of the form "please change X to Y".

The edit may be made by any autoconfirmed user. Remember to change the |answered=no parameter to "yes" when the request has been accepted, rejected or on hold awaiting user input. This is so that inactive or completed requests don't needlessly fill up the edit requests category. You may also wish to use the {{ESp}} template in the response. To request that a page be protected or unprotected, make a protection request.

Unsure if my requests previously went through... I think my time had expired before I could hit publish. Thus, please see the below requests for Judo Bank Wikipedia Page if you have not yet received them. Thank you.

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