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Nominator: Iaof2017 (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 17:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)· contribs) 13:41, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well created and thanks for your contribution. Will do this henceforth.

•  Comment:@Iaof2017: I shall now begin the review.

Copyvio

• Says a good percent. Good to go per this assessment [1]

Lede

• The song was written by Max: change Max to "her", more understandable!
• Unlink "digital download" and "streaming"
• number 17 on the US Billboard Dance/Electronic Songs put like "Billboard's" and unlink Dance/Electronic Songs; its irrelevant
• For further promotion, the singer delivered a performance at the Los 40 Music Awards in Spain on November 4, winning the Best Video category award.: sounds like PROMO; remove the "for further promotion", others seems fine!

Background

• During the Billboard Women in Music event on March 2 link the "Billboard Women in music" to Billboard Women in Music and not separately!
• here, various social media channels can just be "social media".
• Atlantic should go with full name Atlantic Records
• Here again, "Maybe You're the Problem" was written by Max (Amanda Ava Koci), Abraham Dertner, Cirkut (Henry Walter)..." Why the use of their name—please remove the brackets per
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  ; It's an unnecessary parenthesis
• "Set in the key of A major" should be "Set in key A major" instead
• What is the meaning of "N.C–Bm-E/B-A-Dmaj". Fix to central or full time signature meaning so that anyone reading it can understand immediately

Reception

• I would use Paper Mag instead of "Paper": some readers just scroll the reading!
• A critic of Energy. The link was "enery.de". Are they same as "NRJ Group"?
• Grace Twomey for Renowned for Sound identified the song as an "obvious" standout with parallels to Canadian singer the Weeknd's single "Blinding Lights" (2019): use The Weeknd and don't use proper nouns in lowercase letters (except it's the setting/order)
• Rather use "Jordi Bardají in Jenesaispop (linked)"

Commercial performance

• Special comment: this is well articulated.
• Minorities: link "Flanders region of Belgium" to Flanders
• Complete the full meaning of "CIs" to aid readability
• Furthermore, Billboard included the song in its annual compilation of the top Hot Dance/Electronic songs for 2023 should go after the first sentence of the section. i.e. after "entering the top 30 on the Adult Top 40 and Mainstream Top 40 charts."

Track listing

• Is this section "Credits and personnel" necessary. Suggesting maybe it goes to the infobox; few are already maintained in the content body

Image and spot checking

• Source 1 N: while it is considered reliable, yet, it doesn't suit this context. I found different image. Yes, there was a note but we need to know "why it was changed later"
• Sources 2 & 3 Y
• Source 9 N: I can't find the list from the three dots; not considered reliable in that aspect while this source in Songfacts can be used either since I can find the editorial.
• Source 15 N Blog post
• Source 18 Y: Reliable per
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• Comment: I am closing this due to the inactivity of the nominator. Please renominate when ready and ping me when all the reviews above are done. Thanks! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 16:37, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]