Talk:2023 Gold Coast mid-air collision
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Requested move 2 January 2023
- The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
2023 Gold Coast helicopter crash be renamed and moved to ... .
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- Support with the second one Common name first. Air Astana 1388 (talk) 15:09, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support any title that says "mid-air collision". Abductive (reasoning) 23:10, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support title change to “2023 Gold Coast mid-air collision” as per your argument, the other one doesn’t flow as well. TheLachstar (talk) 02:11, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support the second option. RedMetlHedd (talk) 05:01, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support second option as per the titles of similar articles such as 2009 Hudson River mid-air collision and 2007 Zell am See mid-air collision. Steelkamp (talk) 05:20, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support second option, per common thread. Adog (Talk・Cont) 18:20, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support Crash sounds rather informal and doesn't give much information. "Helicopter mid-air collision" sounds better to me, as it clarifies what collided, but it seems precedent is behind option two. Heavy Water (talk) 21:59, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support (second one) more concise with the same impact and information for the reader. - talk) 07:35, 6 January 2023 (UTC)]
- Support move to 2023 Gold Coast mid-air collision for match similar article titles per above. --Harobouri • 🎢 • 🏗️ (he/him) 16:28, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- Support (second option). It makes logical sense and has a precedent based on the proposal. Jargo Nautilus (talk) 22:37, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
Aircraft history
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- I think the aircraft section should be put back, although referring to the aircraft as their registration instead of “arriving” and “departing” throughout the article is a bit verbose. TheLachstar (talk) 02:23, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
I found "arriving" and "departing" very easy to follow. If you replace that with numbers it would be much harder to follow. Anthonyhcole (talk) 12:16, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Agreed. "Arriving" and "departing" is unambiguous, and certainly more easy to understand for the lay reader than registrations/serials, especially when they are similar, and both aircraft are the same model and operator. Nick Cooper (talk) 13:56, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
Added time zone
Added time zone under “Occurrence” using References/Citations 1-4 (listed below) local to location with 24 hour time [and time zone as GMT] in parenthesis. As well as a news article I found [Ref. 3] also below)
(Ref. 1) Colasimone, Dan; Callinan, Rory (2 January 2023). "Four dead after two helicopters collide near Sea World on the Gold Coast" — ABC News
(Ref. 2) Cabral, Sam (2 January 2023). "Australia helicopter collision: Four dead in mid-air incident over Gold Coast" — BBC News
(Ref. 3) Branco, Jorge; 9News Staff (3 January 2023). "Gold Coast helicopter crash: Four dead in accident near Sea World" — Nine News (9News)
(Ref. 4) Marris, Sharon (2 January 2023). "Four dead after two helicopters collide in mid-air near Sea World theme park in Australia" — Sky News
Sroth0616 (talk) 17:44, 2 January 2023 (UTC) Sroth0616 (talk) 17:44, 2 January 2023 (UTC)