Talk:Rafael Bonachela
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- What I think should be changed: The article requires updating to include more meaningful headings; a better introduction; a defined section on Early Life; a summary of Career; a comprehensive list of Performances categorised into dance, film, music and fashion; a new photographic image; updated Awards; additional corresponding references and citations
- Why it should be changed: The current article is a little clumsy and disjointed, it is many lists without narrative
- References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): New references and citations for new additions will be added as applicable
Aiiaan (talk) 10:20, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
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Hi @Aiiaan:, thanks for noting your concerns above. I have closed the request but editors should still read the above and note what needs to be improved in this article. If you have any specific edits or additions you would like to make to this article, please open a new request below. Z1720 (talk) 15:59, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
I think the page would be improved with a more up-to-date portfolio of work and changes to the headings for simplicity. I have created a mock-up for new Introduction and Early Life paragraphs at the link below and would appreciate any comments: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aiiaan/Rafael_Bonachela
Later, if this is acceptable, I will collate the information for Career and Performance headings and post similarly.
Aiiaan (talk) 17:34, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
- I agree that these suggestions are good and worthwhile additions to the article as they provide additional context and information. Interested editors are encouraged to review these edits and consider their value to the article. Should others disagree with some of this information being included, I will not object to additional modifications and deletions. In the meantime, I have closed the edit request. Go4thProsper (talk) 04:34, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
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@Aiiaan It looks like your requested changes are implemented. Please submit a new request if I missed something. Cheers. Duke Gilmore (talk) 02:22, 24 December 2022 (UTC)