- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as ), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 10:23, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
Closing due to article concerns; no prejudice against renomination once the game is released and if the article is brought to GA status.
Untitled The Last of Us game
This was originally a triple nomination, but has been split into three separate nominations. The other two are Template:Did you know nominations/The Last of Us (franchise) and Template:Did you know nominations/The Last of Us: Escape the Dark. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 18:43, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
... that the 2013 video game
Moved to mainspace by Rhain (talk). Self-nominated at 04:37, 5 January 2023 (UTC).
- I will review this nomination shortly. Epicgenius (talk) 13:50, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
All three articles:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 14:27, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- @Rhain and Epicgenius: I'm a bit uneasy about both of these hooks; I'm sure it's not intentional, but having nothing to say about media franchises other than "they exist" or "coming soon" sounds a bit like advertising to me. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 01:33, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
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- Well, I don't think we'd be losing eligibility on any of the articles. Opening up new nominations for each of the other articles is efficient, but probably a little cumbersome. I'd say that it'd be messier, but we can probably get by if you just propose separate new hooks down here and have them all reviewed and promoted into separate preps. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 02:05, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
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- ... that a
- ALT1: ... that
its first standalone multiplayer game?
Source: GamesRadar+
- ALT2: ... that
- More of a comment rather than a review, but I'd suggest against ALT1 and ALT2. Unless the reader is familiar with Naughty Dog or The Last of Us, they probably wouldn't find either hook to be intriguing. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:33, 4 February 2023 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall: @Rhain: Good article. Though I will agree with Narutolovehinata5 that hooks alt1 and alt2 are to Naughty Dog specific to be appealing but I find alt0 alright. Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:18, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
WP:TOOSOON for an article on the main page since the game is untitled and has not been released yet. Once the game is available, we should be able to cite reviews in independent secondary sources; at the moment, we are overly reliant on the vendor's own claims about this work in progress. No prejudice if/when this article is resubmitted for DYK when it reaches GA.
Cielquiparle (
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