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Declined by Aviram7 4 months ago. Last edited by Kalawati55 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: I don't think this draft submission is clearly written in clear ways, please written in right order to this draft again, thenn submit for review,please see
WP:FIRST ~~ αvírαm|(tαlk)
13:49, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Mange Ram

Choudhary Mange Ram Numbardar (born 15 February 1940 - 28 August 2011) wan an Indian Politician. Mange Ram was Minister from Haryana^[1]^[2] in 7th Haryana Legislative Assembly. Mange Ram was member of 6th and 7th Haryana Legislative Assembly from the Bahadurgarh constituency^[3]^[4]^[5]. He was popularly known as Numbardar.

References

^ "Ex-Haryana Minister's Son Dies By Suicide, INLD State Chief Among 6 Charged". NDTV.com. Retrieved 2023-12-25.
^ "Ex-Haryana minister Mange Ram's son's death: INLD state chief among 6 booked for abetment to suicide". Hindustan Times. 2023-01-13. Retrieved 2023-12-25.
^ "Haryana 1982". Election Commission of India. August 20, 2018.
^ "IndiaVotes AC: Haryana 1987". IndiaVotes.
^ "Former Haryana minister's son dies by suicide, INLD state chief among 6 booked". The Indian Express. 2023-01-13. Retrieved 2023-12-25.

[1] "Ex-Haryana Minister's Son Dies By Suicide, INLD State Chief Among 6 Charged". NDTV.com. Retrieved 2023-12-25.

[2] "Ex-Haryana minister Mange Ram's son's death: INLD state chief among 6 booked for abetment to suicide". Hindustan Times. 2023-01-13. Retrieved 2023-12-25.

[3] "Haryana 1982". Election Commission of India. August 20, 2018.

[4] "IndiaVotes AC: Haryana 1987". IndiaVotes.

[5] "Former Haryana minister's son dies by suicide, INLD state chief among 6 booked". The Indian Express. 2023-01-13. Retrieved 2023-12-25.

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