Draft:Unfinished Business (Death Before Dishonor Album)

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Declined by Dan arndt 11 months ago. Last edited by Dogloverr16 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.
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Submission declined on 27 May 2023 by KylieTastic (talk).

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WP:NALBUM - Discogs is not an acceptable or reliable source. Requires significant coverage (not just press releases about its release) in multiple independent secondary sources. Dan arndt (talk
) 06:09, 30 May 2023 (UTC)

"Unfinished Business" is the fifth studio album by Boston Hardcore punk band Death Before Dishonor^[1] It was Recorded, Mixed and Mastered by Zeuss and released in 2019 on Bridge 9 Records.^[2]^[3]

The lead singles from the record included "Cowards Will Fall"^[4] and "True Defeat".^[2]

References

^ "Death Before Dishonor - Unfinished Business". July 26, 2019 – via www.discogs.com.
^ ^a ^b "Hear Hardcore Vets Death Before Dishonor's Crushing First New Song in 10 Years". Revolver. June 14, 2019.
^ Macomber, Shawn (July 24, 2019). "Album Premiere: Death Before Dishonor "Unfinished Business"". Decibel Magazine.
^ "Death Before Dishonor Return with Fury on "True Defeat" (PREMIERE) | Features". No Echo. 9 July 2019.

[1] "Death Before Dishonor - Unfinished Business". July 26, 2019 – via www.discogs.com.

[auto-2] "Hear Hardcore Vets Death Before Dishonor's Crushing First New Song in 10 Years". Revolver. June 14, 2019.

[3] Macomber, Shawn (July 24, 2019). "Album Premiere: Death Before Dishonor "Unfinished Business"". Decibel Magazine.

[No_Echo-4] "Death Before Dishonor Return with Fury on "True Defeat" (PREMIERE) | Features". No Echo. 9 July 2019.

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