User contributions for Ale And Quail
A user with 3,485 edits. Account created on 20 August 2009.
11 May 2024
- 01:5301:53, 11 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Naugahyde →Uses: Tiny copyedit in automaker paragraph. current Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5201:52, 11 May 2024 diff hist +41 m Naugahyde →Uses: Links for this paragraph about automakers. Tag: Visual edit
4 May 2024
- 21:3721:37, 4 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Lantana (film) Don't capitalize the plant name here. (Unless as the Latin species name, then with italics, which isn't called for here.) current Tag: Visual edit
23 April 2024
- 00:0100:01, 23 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Point Amour Lighthouse spelling: 'site', not 'sight'. current Tag: Visual edit
16 April 2024
- 21:1721:17, 16 April 2024 diff hist −11 Tennessee Williams →Early life: cut editorial opinion and rancid cliche: "hardy East Tennessee pioneer stock". I don't know whether the mention is even needed here, but it's now "East Tennessee pioneers". Tag: Visual edit
11 April 2024
- 04:3304:33, 11 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Titan IV →Vehicle description: integrate a phrase into its sentence, rather than use an awkward parenthesis. Tag: Visual edit
16 March 2024
- 06:4306:43, 16 March 2024 diff hist −9 Annenberg Community Beach House →History: Remove the puffery "generous". It still reads like PR copy below. current Tag: Visual edit
13 March 2024
- 04:0304:03, 13 March 2024 diff hist −4 Dina Merrill →Acting career: Remove link to Dick Sheridan, that's not the guy. This Dick Sheridan has a just redirect to Bobby Short, which is alreadly linked in this caption. Tag: Visual edit
29 February 2024
- 16:3816:38, 29 February 2024 diff hist −9 Jah Wobble →Public Image Ltd (PiL): Cut one word of editorial praise, "immortal". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
26 February 2024
- 21:2221:22, 26 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Paul Matisse →Early life and education: fix placement of period. current Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2121:21, 26 February 2024 diff hist −125 Paul Matisse →Early life and education: cut "where he joined a long line of esteemed alumni who had lived in Eliot House while at Harvard." This is ridiculous editorial puffery...why? Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0903:09, 26 February 2024 diff hist +17 The Triumph of Love (2001 film) Fiona Shaw is one of the leads, and notable enough to be mentioned here with Sorvino and Kingsley. Tag: Visual edit
24 February 2024
- 18:0818:08, 24 February 2024 diff hist +37 Porter Ranch, Los Angeles →Aliso Canyon Bridge: Guess we could link Aliso Canyon to the Aliso_Creek_(Los_Angeles_County) page. current Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0418:04, 24 February 2024 diff hist −4 Porter Ranch, Los Angeles →Aliso Canyon Bridge: Remove link at 'Aliso Canyon'. That page is about a different Aliso Canyon, in Orange County. The San Fernando Valley Aliso Canyon does not currently have a page. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3514:35, 24 February 2024 diff hist +24 m Angela Lansbury →The Manchurian Candidate and minor roles: 1952–1965: Fix link to Harlow_(Paramount_film), not a town named Harlow. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
14 February 2024
- 08:1608:16, 14 February 2024 diff hist −7 Mellon family oh, also cut the pointless and peacocking 'famous'. Tag: Visual edit
- 08:1508:15, 14 February 2024 diff hist −10 Mellon family cut the egregious peacock word 'visionary'. can't speak right now to the accuracy or worth of the rest of the sentence. Tag: Visual edit
9 February 2024
- 09:1009:10, 9 February 2024 diff hist +26 m Mapes Hotel →History: Year and italics, at least, for film. Tag: Visual edit
7 February 2024
- 23:2023:20, 7 February 2024 diff hist +5 m Social Democratic and Labour Party →Hume-Adams Talks (1988-1994): added some commas. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1823:18, 7 February 2024 diff hist +92 m Social Democratic and Labour Party →Hume-Adams Talks (1988-1994): bunch of links. Tag: Visual edit
6 February 2024
- 18:5518:55, 6 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Strangers with Candy →Plot: hyphens for "46-year-old". Tag: Visual edit
2 February 2024
- 22:5622:56, 2 February 2024 diff hist +5 Defensive spectrum →Historical shifts: "More recently" is too vague. I started to add a 'when?' tag, but just gave the general period of the cited article. (No idea if this trend is proceeding or receding since then.) current Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1722:17, 2 February 2024 diff hist −12 Satellite city Just saying the names is shorter, simpler, and clearer than 'of the former', 'to the latter.' Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3001:30, 2 February 2024 diff hist +27 m Elliott Gould →Marriages: Italics for film title. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:2301:23, 2 February 2024 diff hist +24 m Elliott Gould →1970s: link to Richard_Rush_(director), 'cause Richard_Rush is "Richard Rush American politician (1780–1859)" 🙂 Tag: Visual edit
31 January 2024
- 05:2805:28, 31 January 2024 diff hist −57 Gary Fisher Since these two documentaries have linked pages, listing their producers here is excess detail. current Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2605:26, 31 January 2024 diff hist +42 m Gary Fisher linkify mention in the text of Klunkerz: A Film About Mountain Bikes. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2505:25, 31 January 2024 diff hist +34 m Gary Fisher Italics for movie titles. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2305:23, 31 January 2024 diff hist 0 Gary Fisher No need to capitalize 'junkers', and it risks confusion with the aircraft manufacturer, too. Tag: Visual edit
26 January 2024
- 02:0102:01, 26 January 2024 diff hist −264 Salisbury Beach State Reservation It's not in "Essex, Massachusetts", but Essex County, Massachusetts. Not sure whether the state name should have its own link here, too. Left Essex County, Massachusetts as one link, for starters. Tag: Visual edit
24 January 2024
- 05:4205:42, 24 January 2024 diff hist +27 Peter Sellers →Technique: Italics for movie title inside box quote. Software appears to be adding automated whitespace changes, too. Tag: Visual edit
23 January 2024
- 05:4005:40, 23 January 2024 diff hist −6 James L. Brooks Spanglish (film) belongs in 'mixed reviews,' not 'acclaim.' Look at its own page: "The film received mixed reviews...On Rotten Tomatoes the film has an approval rating of 54%...On Metacritic it has a score of 48%". Tag: Visual edit
20 January 2024
- 22:2622:26, 20 January 2024 diff hist −31 Riocontra →Developments of the riocontra: 'to have experienced the possibility of writing a song' is really needless verbiage. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2522:25, 20 January 2024 diff hist +7 Riocontra →Developments of the riocontra: just the word 'French' to give context when we say 'verlan.' Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2322:23, 20 January 2024 diff hist +4 m Riocontra →Developments of the riocontra: Verlan needs a link Tag: Visual edit
19 January 2024
- 03:4503:45, 19 January 2024 diff hist −1 Stanley Lupino →Career: The few sentences on his family connections belong better with the general info in the intro, rather than the Career section. Just moved that header down after that brief paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
18 January 2024
- 20:0420:04, 18 January 2024
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Louisa Nottidge
Reverted good faith edits by 92.12.97.111 (talk): Bad grammar in this IP edit. 'Exploited' vs 'utilised' can be discussed further. currentUndo
10 January 2024
- 02:0302:03, 10 January 2024 diff hist +28 m Phil Silvers →Personal life: link: Cal-Neva Lodge has a page. Tag: Visual edit
28 December 2023
- 06:1006:10, 28 December 2023 diff hist +4 m Ulysses' Gaze →Plot: Formatting: italics for a title. Tag: Visual edit
22 December 2023
- 05:1805:18, 22 December 2023 diff hist +4 m Little Women (1933 film) →Production: Link: Orchard House has a page. Tag: Visual edit
19 December 2023
- 02:3802:38, 19 December 2023
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Stage Door
Reverted 1 edit by Hiyathere2018 (talk) to last revision by JCW-CleanerBot
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17 December 2023
- 00:5400:54, 17 December 2023 diff hist −1 Henri Alekan →See also: An external link was in the wrong section, 'See Also.' Moved it to External Links. Not sure this link is worth it; just another filmography, and a bare-bones one. Could consider deleting it. Tag: Visual edit
14 December 2023
- 16:3716:37, 14 December 2023 diff hist −1 m Second Sino-Japanese War →Post-war struggle and resumption of the civil war: 'Stilwell' misspelled once Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
12 December 2023
- 03:4803:48, 12 December 2023 diff hist +29 m Cooney Weiland →Coach: don't peacock this name; do linkify it. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4703:47, 12 December 2023 diff hist −14 Cooney Weiland →Coach: cut peacock words "the legendary" Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4103:41, 12 December 2023 diff hist −15 m Boston Garden →Design: "aforementioned" presumably applied in some past edit, but is wrong now. Tag: Visual edit
6 December 2023
- 22:4822:48, 6 December 2023 diff hist −24 12th arrondissement of Paris Why be so wordy as "the most expansive in terms of area covered"? Tag: Visual edit
5 December 2023
- 19:0919:09, 5 December 2023 diff hist +16 Without Love (film) →Production: don't be coy in our reference to I Love Lucy ; link it when we say "a filmed television show". Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0819:08, 5 December 2023 diff hist +4 Without Love (film) →Production: linkify Karl Freund in the body, not just the infobox. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0405:04, 5 December 2023 diff hist +1 m The Nightfly →Songs: missing quote mark Tag: Visual edit
