User contributions for JLNWriter

23 April 2024

• 18:1618:16, 23 April 2024 diff hist +401‎ m Videotelephony ‎No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit

28 September 2023

• 14:2914:29, 28 September 2023 diff hist −67‎ Sucré ‎ The introduction showed clear bias. "Sucré has grown so much in popularity that they now offer nationwide shipping. [1] They also offer other products such as corporate gifting, perfect for your business. [2]" Citations link directly to business making opinion wording directly linked to an unreliable source trying to sell itself. Rewording to: "Sucré has expanded its business to offer nationwide shipping and corporate gifting." I left the citations for now. Tag: Visual edit

22 September 2023

• 15:1415:14, 22 September 2023 diff hist +536‎ Talk:Hotel rating ‎ →‎British vs American English: Reply Tag: Reply
• 13:1913:19, 22 September 2023 diff hist −8‎ m Mompiche ‎ →‎Geography: Changed "rich history" to "history" Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

21 September 2023

• 16:3616:36, 21 September 2023 diff hist −4‎ m San Ignacio Lagoon ‎ →‎Facts about San Ignacio Lagoon: Corrected statements from All to some/many to ensure factual correctness. All-encompassing statements cannot be factually proven. Still need citations for this info. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 16:2916:29, 21 September 2023 diff hist −7‎ m Someshwar Beach ‎ Grammar corrections. Tone edits. No altered info. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 16:2616:26, 21 September 2023 diff hist +467‎ Talk:Kirkwood Mountain Resort ‎ →‎Still up to date?: new section Tag: New topic
• 16:2316:23, 21 September 2023 diff hist −57‎ m Kirkwood Mountain Resort ‎ Removed emotional language. Same information. Removed a couple of basic terms that indicate bias whilst leaving the core data. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 16:1616:16, 21 September 2023 diff hist −92‎ m Beyond Good ‎ →‎History: Removed a couple of unnecessary filler words. Same information. More to the point. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 16:1316:13, 21 September 2023 diff hist +423‎ Talk:Beyond Good ‎ →‎Innacurate statement: new section Tag: New topic
• 16:0516:05, 21 September 2023 diff hist −26‎ m Loango National Park ‎ →‎History: same info, reworded to be more direct to the point and fit tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 16:0116:01, 21 September 2023 diff hist +557‎ Talk:Loango National Park ‎ →‎Suggested edit: new section Tag: New topic