User contributions for Jon Pacilio
A user with 119 edits. Account created on 24 March 2017.
7 May 2017
- 21:5121:51, 7 May 2017 diff hist +4 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements →Thoughts to add to Trade and Commodities Section Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5021:50, 7 May 2017 diff hist +2,522 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Here's my added trade and commodities pieces. Thought it added substance and good information to an otherwise bland and lackluster section of the wikipedia page. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4821:48, 7 May 2017 diff hist +2,286 Roman economy Added two paragraphs. One was about the expanding of trade under emperor augustus and then the other one mentions how the trading and commerce industry grew and stop in the Empire. I thought interesting to add as it reveals major economic components. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2121:21, 7 May 2017 diff hist +267 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Thoughts on changes to Trade and commodities section. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1221:12, 7 May 2017 diff hist +14 Roman economy Made last changes to introduction in terms of linking things and making sure citations are correct. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0721:07, 7 May 2017 diff hist +211 Roman economy Finalized the Financial Crisis new section. feel good about it. Checked out my sources and added a sentence or two. I think it's very interesting and the readers will enjoy. Easy to understand. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0421:04, 7 May 2017 diff hist +2,327 Roman economy changed sentences around and the wording of financial crises paragraph Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 20:4620:46, 7 May 2017 diff hist +4 Roman economy changed denarius to a link to denarius, so again the article is more academic and credible, and informative as well as doesn't leave readers wondering what that is but rather they can click the link and quickly read about it to understand article more. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4520:45, 7 May 2017 diff hist +20 Roman economy Changed Severan to a link to Severan Dynasties so readers that want to know more about that emperor or time period can just click that link and be ok. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4420:44, 7 May 2017 diff hist +16 Roman economy sentence and minor word changes. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4220:42, 7 May 2017 diff hist −5 Roman economy Wording and punctuational changes in first two intro paragraph's. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3120:31, 7 May 2017 diff hist +10 Roman economy Format changes with picture movement and editing paragraph's. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2920:29, 7 May 2017 diff hist −1,643 Roman economy Finished adding my changes to the introduction onto the real Wikipedia page. Now will go review and see if I'm all set. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2720:27, 7 May 2017 diff hist +44 Roman economy Deleted Duplicate Sources Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2220:22, 7 May 2017 diff hist +704 Roman economy Added a paragraph and made word changes to beginning sentence of the third intro paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2020:20, 7 May 2017 diff hist −392 Roman economy Deleted Holder of Debt Sentence as it didn't really fit in and is common knowledge that debt holders can exchange IOU's for cash payment. Had nothing to do really with the Roman economy. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1820:18, 7 May 2017 diff hist +2 Roman economy Copying and pasting paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1620:16, 7 May 2017 diff hist −17 Roman economy Changed wording of opening sentence of third paragraph to make it more concise and scholarly. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1520:15, 7 May 2017 diff hist −322 Roman economy Deleted a sentence about why the Elite used coins for stampage that I thought was a repeat of earlier sentence and makes for a better transition from first intro paragraph into the second. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1320:13, 7 May 2017 diff hist +5 Roman economy Changed wording of sentence. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 20:1220:12, 7 May 2017 diff hist −2 Roman economy Changed wording. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1120:11, 7 May 2017 diff hist 0 Roman economy Moved sentence from later paragraph into this one, fits better. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0920:09, 7 May 2017 diff hist +18 Roman economy Added source. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0720:07, 7 May 2017 diff hist −1,177 Roman economy Deleted some exact/similar sentences to what I changed and had already put into Wikipedia that no longer need to be on the Wikipedia page. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0620:06, 7 May 2017 diff hist −388 Roman economy Deleted Unnecessary Sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0520:05, 7 May 2017 diff hist −374 Roman economy Big change. Changed around the sentences and structure of the paragraphs that I had in my draft to make it sound smoother when read. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5619:56, 7 May 2017 diff hist +1,542 Roman economy Added parts from my draft onto to the wikipedia page, making changes to it to ensure that it flows well and my citations are all lined up. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4219:42, 7 May 2017 diff hist +1,068 Roman economy Added information about the characteristics of the Roman Economy in terms of no central bank, ties in perfectly to how in the Empire the money supply got out of hand and money printed often. Think it flows well and short but informative. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4019:40, 7 May 2017 diff hist +676 Roman economy No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3919:39, 7 May 2017 diff hist +16 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Added source and changed the phrasing a little before posting it onto Wikipedia's real page. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3519:35, 7 May 2017 diff hist −542 Roman economy Erased the sentence where it talks about coinage. Irrelevant. This page is about roman ECONOMY. Added my sentence about how economy changed beginning with Roman Empire. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 19:3419:34, 7 May 2017 diff hist −226 Roman economy Deleted Sentence, added my edit from my sandbox about the financial markets. Thought: This is very cool knowing my work can potentially be read by 1,000's of people. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3219:32, 7 May 2017 diff hist −5 Roman economy Made minor word changes in the first sentence. Nothing Major. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2919:29, 7 May 2017 diff hist −42 Roman economy Added the first sentence of my newly drafted and changed into onto Wikipedia! Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2419:24, 7 May 2017 diff hist +130 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Added source, changed last part of paragraph to make it sound better and tie up the intro more concisely and academically. Allows me to eliminate other unnecessary intro sentences. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2119:21, 7 May 2017 diff hist −266 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Removed the final sentence "The Standardization of money..." As I thought it just repeated what was stated earlier and not really necessary to the introduction. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1619:16, 7 May 2017 diff hist +73 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Combined two intro paragraphs after making changes to both as I realized it sounded smoother and worked better making it one paragraph. Reads better for the reader. Added a source as well. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1019:10, 7 May 2017 diff hist −240 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Continuously expanding on my changes and adding some new sources. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0419:04, 7 May 2017 diff hist +1,273 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Made minor changes to my first part of introduction as prepare to post to Wikipedia. Found new sources and changed some sentences to provide more info about the actual economy. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 7 May 2017 diff hist +99 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements →My Changes Tag: Visual edit
25 April 2017
- 23:5323:53, 25 April 2017 diff hist +2,323 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Added new section Financial Crises. Found a great JSTOR article and website about the crisis of 33AD. Will continue to look and research for other crisis that took place in the Ancient Roman economy. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4822:48, 25 April 2017 diff hist −145 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements →Thoughts for Improving Roman Economy Article Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4722:47, 25 April 2017 diff hist +656 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Finalized initial changes to the introduction of Roman Economy page. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3222:32, 25 April 2017 diff hist +310 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Added sources to changes I made in second paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2722:27, 25 April 2017 diff hist +4,484 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Changes to second paragraph in intro. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4621:46, 25 April 2017 diff hist +6,943 m User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements Saving progress in beginning my article draft. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5420:54, 25 April 2017 diff hist −18 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 20:2520:25, 25 April 2017 diff hist +3,161 User talk:Rlippitt19/sandbox →Peer Review: Thoughts on Draft: new section current
- 20:1020:10, 25 April 2017 diff hist −551 User:Jon Pacilio/Bibliography for Article Improvements →Thoughts for Improving Roman Economy Article Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0420:04, 25 April 2017 diff hist +3,239 User talk:Scoughla/sandbox →Peer Review: Article Improvements: new section current
