Talk:2007 Emirates Cup/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will be reviewing this. MWright96 (talk) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (

   focused

   ):

3. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have

   fair use rationales

   ): b (appropriate use with

   suitable captions

   ):

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• You want to change "football" to "association football" to avoid confusion for American readers

Background

• "Details of the tournament were formally announced weeks later," - How many weeks later exactly?

Summary

• "Referee Alan Kelly turned down Inter's appeals for a penalty," - I understand this but I think it would be better as Inter Milan's for non-football fans
• "Inter nearly equalised through Maxwell as his effort hit the hot," - I did not understand the word that is bolded, do you mean post?
• "Wenger tweaked his team's formation after the break from their customary 4–4–2 to 4–4–1–1 ," - the extra space between the second "1" and the comma aren't needed
• "Near the end of normsl time" - spelling error.

References

• No dead links

Nice work. On hold until points are actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:37, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• Thanks for taking the time to review @MWright96: have made the corrections you've suggested. Lemonade51 (talk) 09:48, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Lemonade51: Can now pass this review. MWright96 (talk) 11:36, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]