Talk:2016 E3 Harelbeke/GA1

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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 07:48, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 07:48, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (

   lists

   ):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (

   focused

   ):

4. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have

   suitable captions

   ):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Some things left to do here:

• At the end of the first paragraph, you need to make it clearer that Kwiatkowski is comparing himself a year before with Sagan when saying that it is "very difficult" with the pressure of the rainbow jersey.
• You also need to make the expression "without legs" clearer. Maybe don't use the quote at all and rather paraphrase it.
• Also, you use the word "said" too often in that section. Try to find some synonyms to make it a more enjoyable read.
• The article could also use another photo, maybe one in the favorites section, or one of the eventual winner in the race summary or post-race section.

Sorry this took so long. I should be through all four reviews by tomorrow. On hold for now. Good job so far! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 10:47, 12 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Since the nominator does not appear to be coming back, I have made the changes myself. Passed for GA. Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:50, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]