Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014/GA1
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:14, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
- I've copy-edited the article for some changes I felt were uncontroversial instead of listing them here.
- "the nation had participated in the Eurovision Song Contest ten times since its first entry in 2004" I'd rewrite this "the nation had participated in every edition of the Eurovision Song Contest since its first entry in 2004."
- ", to this point," Seems unnecessary, should be cut.
- "The first entry was performed by" to "Its 2004 entry was performed by"
- "During its tenure in the contest, Albania failed to qualify for the final three times, with the 2013 entry being the most recent non-qualifier" to "Albania had previously failed to qualify for the final three times, most recently in 2013."
- "broadcast at 20:45 (CET) on the respective dates" I'd remove "on the respective dates", it's obvious from context.
- Images and references are okay. Spot-checks revealed no issues that I could find. AGF-ing on Albanian language refs.
- Not required at the GA level, but the Albanian refs should have a translated title in English.
- That's all I got.
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