Talk:Ansgar Løvold/GA1

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 21:47, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Generally a well written article, just a few quibbles:

• "...became Norwegian Champion in Greco-Roman wrestling in 1912" no need for caps in 'Champion' should be lowercase → 'Norwegian champion'
• "The started as a butcher apprentice" replace bold bit with 'Løvold'
• Any reason why "Løvold died on 12 November 1961 in Kristiansund, 72 years old" is doing under the heading 'Early life and professional career'. Given that the article reads in a chronological order, his death should come last. I would place it as the last sentence.

No issues with sourcing or imaging. On hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 21:54, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I've fixed the three issues. Arsenikk ^(talk) 08:58, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]