Talk:Black-backed forktail/GA1
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talk · contribs) 09:57, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
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- Garhwal and Tenasserim link to disambiguation pages.
- I'd link 'coverts' to Covert feather, assuming that's what you're referring to.
- "and the inner primaries have white tips and the base of the secondaries are covered in a small white patch" - two uses of "and the" makes this read awkwardly
- "least concern" is in lower case in the lead though is stylised "Least Concern" in the final paragraph.
This article continues the comprehensive and well-written style I've come to expect from you. Well done. Looking forward to passing this when very minor issues are addressed.
talk) 09:57, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
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