Talk:Club Harlem

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Coordinates and map location incorrect?

The coordinates and map location for Club Harlem in infobox are several blocks from Kentucky Avenue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bunkyray5 (talkcontribs) 01:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Display issues at newspaperarchive

Originally, I had to clip the news story from the Altoona Mirror in 2 segments due to display issues at newspaperarchive.com. When I went back to look for something else, I found that the last half of the news story was displaying here as a ref link as "Image not found". A complete copy of the story is now hosted elsewhere as the article's ref. We hope (talk) 20:54, 28 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (
    lists
    )
    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (
    focused
    )
    :
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy
    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have
    suitable captions
    )
    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

History

  • "Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania  Done
  • "It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?
I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees?  Done
  • Adelaide, Australia is a dab link  Done
  • Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability  Done

Shows

  • "The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency  Done
  • "Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto  Done
  • "in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6  Done
  • "and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in  Done
  • "to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang  Done

Final years and demolition

  • I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead  Done

References

Nice work by everyone who worked on this article. On hold until my points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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