Talk:Empedocles (The X-Files)/GA1

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talk · contribs) 14:40, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Minor edits i made:

Plot
  • "Jeb he sees a car chase" >> "Jeb witnesses a car chase"
  • "the murders is related to" >> "the murders are related to"
  • "through the head" >> "in the head"
  • "when they discovered Luke’s body, Reyes and Doggett both saw the body transform into ashes momentarily." >> "both Reyes and Doggett saw it transform into ashes instantly."
  • "convincing himself he did not see it" >> "convincing himself he did not saw it"
  • "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but Reyes soon shows up" Redundancy of "soon". >> "Doggett soon attacks Mulder for looking into his son's case, but then Reyes shows up"
  • Other minor fixes. They're too many to note here.

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21 04:20, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Luke's murder was solved in "Release"---- Knowing there could be trouble if Luke ever told anyone about Regali's "business", Regali killed Luke. 24.156.65.45 (talk) 22:15, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

here
for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (
    lists
    )    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to
    reliable sources):
    c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have
    suitable captions
    )    :

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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21 04:38, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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