Talk:Frankenstein, MD

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23W (talk · contribs) 06:17, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
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  • "comedy/Gothic horror": rephrase as "Gothic horror comedy", or simply "horror comedy". We can't use
    Gothic horror
    .
 Done
  • "Frankenstein, MD was announced on May 5, 2014": shorten to simply "May 2014"; the exact date isn't necessary.
 Done
  • "The show is PBS Digital's first scripted program though": add a comma before "though".
 Done
  • 'which Su claimed was because, "Real science': decapitalize "Real".
 Done
  • In the cast and characters section, changed the em dashes (—) to en dashes (–) (em dashes aren't supposed to be spaced per
    MOS:DASH
    ).
 Done
  • Try to tighten the quotes in the section. We don't need the elaboration of what
    STEM
    stands for, for example.
 Done
  • Conform to
    #Bulleted and numbered lists
    ; a number of them mix sentence fragments and non-fragments with incorrect punctuation).
 Done, I think.
  • Split the list of episodes into its own article at some point? Not going to hold passing the article on it, but it's rather unsightly in the middle of all the prose.
If anything is added to the episode list (ie, episode summaries), I'll split it off. For now I think it's just short enough to stay but I could move Reception up above it if you think it would be better suited there.

That's all I got. Nice work! On hold for 14 days.

23W 06:24, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
]

Forgot to mention: try to cut down repeat consecutive references at the end of sentences if you can afford it (e.g. not after a direct quote per
23W 07:01, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
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 Done.
23W, tell me if you feel I've missed anything and I'll be happy to work on it. Thanks for your review! BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 21:46, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
]
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23W 21:55, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
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I wish it weren't over but there has been no indication that a second season is being/will be produced. In lieu of evidence otherwise, I'm just going to assume that what has been produced is all that will be produced. Does that work? BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 22:11, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@
23W 22:15, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply
]
Thanks so much! BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 22:18, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]