Talk:Fuego (Eleni Foureira song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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I will get on with this one now! --K. Peake 06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • Infobox looks good!
  • "who also wrote it with" → "who also served as co-writers with" to avoid overusage of it
  • "It was released it as a" → "It was released as a" but shouldn't the initial Greek release be mentioned here too?
  • "its lyrics addressing" → "the lyrics addressing"
  • Where is the nation's best result part sourced?
  • Shouldn't it be "positive" or "generally positive" since there is not enough reviews to support universal acclaim?
  • Instead of adding the word Spanish before the organization's name, add afterwards that the certification was in Spain
  • "and first uploaded to the Panik's" → "and first uploaded to Panik's"

Background and composition

  • Shouldn't the Greece release be mentioned before the various countries since that was initial?
  • Where is the English language part sourced?
  • "have inside them."" → "have inside them"." per
    MOS:QUOTE
  • "and strength, with an" → "and strength[, with] an" per paraphrasing of the quote
  • "love and more."" → "love and more"."

Reception

  • Start a new para for the commercial reception
  • "on record charts, after its" → "on record charts after its"

Promotion and other usage

  • "Malta, Netherlands, Sweden" → "Malta, the Netherlands, Sweden"
  • The Fama A Bailar and Los40 Music Awards performances are not sourced
  • Mention at the start of the several artists sentence something like them all being Eurovision contestants for relevancy
  • Lowercase the Black Mamba per
    MOS:THEMUSIC
  • "of the reality talent show of" → "of the reality talent show"

At Eurovision Song Contest

Before Lisbon

  • "Prior to that," → "Prior to this,"
  • "Eleni Foureira with the song "Fuego" was" → "Foureira with "Fuego" was"
  • "in Lisbon, saying "I would" → "in Lisbon, saying: "I would"
  • "all of these years"." → "all of these years."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences

In Lisbon

  • Img looks good!
  • "the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per
    MOS:NUM
  • What is the usage of [54] exactly?
I moved it to the relevant position. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:34, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Should it be created by lasers instead of laser lights?
  • "[...] and a cross" → "[and] a cross" per the actual paraphrasing
  • Italicise HuffPost
  • Remove pipe on Billboard and only use the surname Adams per him already having been introduced
  • "Steve Holden described it" → "Steve Holden described the performance as"
  • "and labelled it a" → "and labelled the act a"
  • "elaborated that "given the" → "elaborated, "Given the"
  • "some red-hot dance moves"." → "some red-hot dance moves."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences

Track listing

  • Good

Charts

Weekly charts

  • I don't think the Spanish Airplay and Swedish Heatseekers charts should be included when the main ones are for those countries

Year-end charts

Certifications

  • Good

Release history

  • Good

See also

  • Good

References

  • Copyvio score looks quite good at 28.1%!!
  • Wikilink Wiwibloggs on ref 4 instead of ref 53
  • Shouldn't you only cite BBC for ref 7 since the name changed years ago?
  • Cite Billboard as work/website on ref 8
  • Cite Metro as work/website instead on ref 9 and pipe to Metro (British newspaper)
  • Shouldn't the publisher just be IFPI Greece on ref 12 since I never see the full IFPI name used for it?
  • WP:OVERLINK
    of YouTube on ref 20
  • Ref 23 needs a work/publisher, also can Coca-Cola Bottling Shqipëria really be an author when it is a copmpany?
  • I am not sure about ref 41 per
    WP:RSSM
  • Remove or replace ref 60 per
    WP:RSP
  • Cite HuffPost as work/website instead on ref 61
  • Ditto for The National Herald on ref 62
  • Pipe Plötutíóindi to Music of Iceland on ref 73
  • WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 75

Final comments and verdict

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice job on this one! --K. Peake 08:43, 24 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Kyle Peake hope you're good. I've responded to all of your concerns. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:41, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass now, great work from you and I only had to do copy editing in some areas! --K. Peake 06:55, 26 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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