Talk:Hammerfest Airport/GA1
GA Review
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer:
talk · contribs) 10:41, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
]
- Comments:
- No DAB links, no dead links
- Files look OK in terms of licensing.
- Hammerfest experiences a considerable leakage to Alta Airport for flights to Oslo. I don't follow you here (what is "a considerable leakage")?
- Hammerfest was from 1935 served by scheduled seaplanes at a water aerodrome at Rypefjord. how about Hammerfest was served from 1935 by...
- A Dash 8 was written off after a hard landing in 2005. what do you mean "written off"? Removed from the fleet?
Facilities
- It includes a separate area for helicopter traffic, but this is not in use. In the lead you say The airport is the base for offshore helicopter services operated by Bristow Norway and CHC Helikopter Service. If the airport is the base, why is it not in use? In the history section you have that a company took the helicopter service over, but the article doesn't explain why there is not service.
I will finish my review when these comments are responded to. Thanks,
talk) 22:40, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
]
- Thank you and sorry for the late reply (I was out on an excursion without Internet this weekend). Arsenikk (talk) 13:58, 4 March 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- I am busy with work in real life, I will review all sections but "History"
Airlines and destinations
- One of the Super Pumas is used for search and rescue operations for the petroleum industry and when the Royal Norwegian Air Force's Westland Sea Kings are not available at Station Group Banak. What do you mean "when the Royal Norwegian Air Force's Westland Sea Kings are not available"? What are they used for when the RNAFWSK aircraft are not available?
- The airport experiences a leakage... can you reword "leakage" again?
- What references the table?
Accidents and incidents
- The resulting increased descent rate was attempted counteracted by the pilot by increasing to full power. How about The pilot attempted to counteract the increased descent rate by increasing to full power. Also, can you clarify what "full power" is? Some ambiguity here.
Future
- as an reclaimed land as a reclaimed land
- Neither lengths would allow flights to Oslo. Why not? talk) 01:37, 7 March 2013 (UTC)]
History
- ... as one of several stop should be plural "stops"
- Hammerfest was the second airport to receive SCAT-I, a Global Positioning System-based landing system, when was installed in 2007. when it was installed in 2007, and can you provide any more information about this?
I will pass when these comments are responded to.
talk) 15:46, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
]