Talk:Iowa Cow War/GA1

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 17:27, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think I can handle this review. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 17:27, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It's definitely very thorough for such a niche topic, and mostly within the GA criteria, however I think there ars e a few things it could use (in order of importance):

• Some kind of image(s). Obviously, photos of the actual event aren't exactly plentiful, but pictures of something relevant (e.g.
  bovine tuberculosis or Norman G. Baker
  ) would help illustrate the page.
• The fact that the compensation for the cows being slaughtered was less than their market value isn't mentioned in the article, which seems to be the main reason the protests started.
• An infobox is always helpful for any page.
• You might want to link Iowa National Guard. However, given the state the article is in, I could see why you wouldn't.

All in all, quite good, with excellent prose. Once these things are addressed, I will happily list it as a GA. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 17:45, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

An anonymous username, not my real name Thanks for the review. I think that I took care of those issues. SL93 (talk) 18:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Perfect. You did an excellent job on this article. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]