Talk:Jutsu (Naruto)/GA1

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GA Review


Hi, I am reviewing this article and will leave some comments below. —
Mattisse (Talk) 03:11, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • I like this article, but I am concerned that it is too list-like. Do you think it would be better as a list? Or do you think you could prosofy it some, and reduce the number of similar sections?

Mattisse (Talk) 03:11, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • You say this is not a list because it covers all aspects of the subject it addresses, even though it has an iterative format?

Mattisse (Talk) 21:14, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Uh, it doesn't have an iterative format. You could say that the recurring jutsu section has an iterative format in some aspects, but the presence of an embedded list doesn't make the whole article a list. If this was merely a list, I wouldn't have to cover chakra for instance, as my goal would be simply covering the jutsu. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 08:19, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I do not understand how you have the jutzu broken down. You say there are three types. But then you have listed six different names under "Jutsu types". Next you have "Recurring jutsu" with another long list of tecniques under that. Is there a different way of listing these that would be more understandable to the general reader?
  • Read the introduction to the "jutsu types" section. Ninjutsu has sealing jutsu and cursed seal jutsu as sub-categories, and it's stated that senjutsu and kekkai genkai are not really jutsu, but different ways of performing jutsu. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 08:19, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, I am checking the "list" status before we proceed.

Mattisse (Talk) 02:10, 8 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I don't really see what there is to check. I seriously doubt any of the FLC regulars will consider this a list, and I can say this with a good amount of confidence. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 08:19, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • O.K. It is an interesting article and well done. It is not a list. Sorry to have kicked up a disturbance because I was unsure about that. —Mattisse (Talk) 19:13, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Final

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for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): Well written b (MoS): Follows MoS
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): Well referenced b (citations to
    reliable sources): Sources are reliable c (OR
    ): No OR
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): Sets the context b (focused): Remains focused on subject
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy
    .
    Fair representation without bias: NPOV
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have
    suitable captions
    )
    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: