Talk:Lady Blue (TV series)/GA1
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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 04:46, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
Time to return the favor. I'll go ahead and take this on. Comments may appear tomorrow or Sunday depending on my schedule. Hold me to this and don't let me forget about it. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 04:46, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for picking this up for review! Aoba47 (talk) 04:50, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Thank you for picking this up for review!
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (lists):
- a (prose): b (
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (focused):
- a (
- It follows the neutral point of viewpolicy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead/infobox
- I thought runtimes generally omitted commercials; perhaps you could at least put "60 minutes (including commercials)" if you want to keep the 60.
- Added. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Added.
Premise and characters
- I'd simplify the image caption.
- Reduced somewhat. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Reduced somewhat.
- Link to John J. O'Connor (journalist).
- Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Linked.
Production
- "steely nerve and conservative stance on crime" with Rose's "more upbeat, fun-loving, liberal persona". I know the source here is the Reesman article, but I think an IC would be good here to more clearly attribute the quotes to their source.
- I am not sure what you mean by this. What is an IC? Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- @Aoba47: Sorry, inline citation. In other words, I'd put a ref tag right after the quote. It won't keep it from passing GA though. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 21:11, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
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- I am not sure what you mean by this. What is an IC?
Episodes
- Is there a specific airdate for the final episode?
- Unfortunately, I could not find an exact date for the final episode (especially one from a reliable source). Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Unfortunately, I could not find an exact date for the final episode (especially one from a reliable source).
Broadcast history
- Bryan Reesman's first name can be removed per WP:SURNAME.
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Revised.
Critical reception
- O'Connor, Anderson and Reesman have already been mentioned in the article, so again, WP:SURNAME.
- Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- Revised.
Just some minor prose issues. Well done! Putting on hold. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 18:27, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
- @Aoba47: Well done. Pass for GA. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 21:12, 27 January 2018 (UTC)]
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