Talk:Magical Mystery Cure/GA1

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talk · contribs) 17:17, 28 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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  • Non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Thank you
  • "focused" → "focuses"
  •  Done
  • "which preceded" → "that preceded"
  •  Done
  • The second and third paragraphs end and start with "premiere". Reword.
  •  Fixed
  • "Priase" – typo
  •  Fixed
  • "jump the shark" moment → a "jump the shark" moment
  •  Done
  • The plot section is 399 words which passes
    MOS:TVPLOT
    .
  • Add a hyphen between "most viewed".
  •  Done
  • Sources are archived. Thumbs up icon
  • Ping when done.
    talk) 21:47, 28 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you for your comments,
Some Dude From North Carolina. I believe I have addressed them all and if there are any further changes you would like me to make, please feel free to let me know! Pamzeis (talk) 04:28, 29 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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