Talk:Max Whitlock/GA1
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Reviewer: MovieTalk101178 (talk · contribs) 19:45, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for
GA status over the next week. Thank you for nominating the article. MovieTalk101178 (talk) 19:45, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
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Lead, info box, and early life
Nicely written sections. :)
Career
2010-11:
Whitlock won gold on pommel horse and floor exercise and silver in the all-around at the 2010 Junior European Championships held in Birmingham
- Reference 10 seems to be junior and senior WAG?He also won the silver medal on the pommel horse
- I don't see the source mentioning anything about Whitlock’s PH silver but it's possible I'm missing something?
2012: Ok.
2013: Ok.
2014: Ok.
2015: 2015:
After the European Championships, his coach announced Whitlock would take a break from training to recover, during which he also cancelled any public appearances and stopped using social media.
– Looking at the ref, I don't see anything about a social media break (although after tweeting that he resumed training, it's clear that he did take break). :)
2016: Ok.
2017: Ok.
2018:
However, an error in his routine on the pommel horse caused him to finish seventh in the event final.
– Going through the source, I don't see anything about Whitlock finishing 7th?
2019: Ok.
2021:
The team took fourth place with a score of 255.76
– I don't see any final results listed in the ref?
2022-23:
Whitlock took 18 months off from training
– I can see ref 76 says 10 months while ref 77 says 18.
During the pommel horse final, Whitlock fell and finished fifth.
– I don’t see any mention of Whitlock placing 5th in the reference?
Awards and honours
Whitlock finished seventh in the public vote for the 2014, 2015, and 2016 BBC Sports Personality of the Year awards.
- It looks like Whitlock was 8th in 2015.
Personal life
Their first child, a daughter named Willow, was born on 23 February 2019
- It doesn’t look like the actual birthday of Whitlock’s daughter is cited in ref 89 unless I’m missing something? It does say February 2019 though. :)
Competitive history
Ok.
References
A few notes on references for future improvement. :)
- Ref 5 requires subscription but based on the title and publisher, the source is reputable. I can see an archived version from Aug 4, 2026, allows the reader to view the full article.
- Ref 8 requires subscription but based on the title and publisher, the source is reputable. I can see an archived version from 2016 allows the reader to view the full article.
- Reference 44 requires subscription but the source is reliable based on the publisher.
- Reference 52 requires subscription but the source is reliable based on the publisher.
- Reference 62 requires subscription but the source is reliable based on the publisher.
- Reference 63 requires subscription but the source is reliable b ased on the publisher.
Overall comments
This article is well written and very close to
GA level. :) Thank you for nominating the article Riley1012! There are just some small issues (or questions) related to a couple of references. Let me know how it goes. :) MovieTalk101178 (talk) 01:19, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
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- Thanks for the review MovieTalk101178! -Riley1012 (talk) 00:28, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for fixing. :) I'll promote the article now. :) MovieTalk101178 (talk) 00:30, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review MovieTalk101178! -Riley1012 (talk) 00:28, 11 March 2024 (UTC)