Talk:Military history of the Aleutian Islands/GA1
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onau) 01:55, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
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- Zoom in on the map or else tweak it a little; currently the rivers and the bright green coastlines detract from the red dot... (besides, that isn't the entirety of the Aleutian Islands...) onau) 01:55, 6 February 2011 (UTC)]
- The American burials were undertaken at Massacre Bay as well as at Holtz Bay - in the former case, the bodies of the soldiers were buried in individual graves of size one foot deep in groups of eight soldiers.... ...of size one foot deep...? Clarify. onau) 02:37, 6 February 2011 (UTC)]
- Clarified - I hope this is clearer. Arctic Night 02:47, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
- Good job. I will wait for the image for a week or so, if the attempt proves unsuccessful, could you contact the creator of the current map. onau) 03:05, 6 February 2011 (UTC)]
- Good job. I will wait for the image for a week or so, if the attempt proves unsuccessful, could you contact the creator of the current map.
- I changed the image for you. You could also use it on the onau) 04:06, 7 February 2011 (UTC)]
- Clarified - I hope this is clearer. Arctic Night 02:47, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
- Zoom in on the map or else tweak it a little; currently the rivers and the bright green coastlines detract from the red dot... (besides, that isn't the entirety of the Aleutian Islands...)