Talk:Morral affair/GA1

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• Add a short description and then
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  text for every image.
  • Alt text is not part of the GA criteria but noted
• "afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
  • Both are AmEng

That link sends you to "afterward". See [1]

talk) 00:53, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply

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• "bouquet of flowers" → "flower bouquet" (simply "bouquet" would also work because "bouquet" means an "arranged bunch of flowers" so "bouquet of flowers" is repetitive).
• Add a serial comma after "antigovernmental curriculum".
  • "its antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental curriculum and other subversive activities" antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental describes the curriculum here so it's not a list of items
• "antianarchist journalist" → "anti-anarchist journalist"
• "regarded himself an outspoken enemy" → "regarded himself as an outspoken enemy"
• "told the investigation" - reword
• "a bombs expert" → "a bomb expert"
• Remove the comma after "June 1907".
• "kangaroo court,^{[20][21][22][23][24]} – make a
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• "judgement" → "judgment" (American English)
  • Both are AmEng

...but judgment is more common for American English.

talk) 00:54, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply

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• Ping when done.
  talk) 16:06, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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    Some Dude From North Carolina, done! Thanks for the review czar 18:36, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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      source reliability. czar 01:30, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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      • Hi @
        Some Dude From North Carolina, checking back czar 01:19, 27 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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