Talk:Myles Cale/GA1
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:20, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be reviewing this article to help reduce the backlog and gain points for the WikiCup. Although QPQ is by no means required, if you fancy returning the favor, I have a list of articles in need of review here.
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Infobox and lede
- "connecting" → "which connects"
- Reference needed for date of birth if not mentioned in the body
Early life and high school career
- Comma after "Middletown, Delaware" per MOS:GEOCOMMA
- Add link to Boys & Girls Clubs of America
- The link used in the first reference currently goes to a 911 briefing, try this link
- Link "junior" to Junior (education) and mention what year was his junior year
- Spell out and link Delaware Interscholastic Athletic Association for DIAA
- Link "senior" to Senior (education)
- Awkward space needs removed in "All- State"
- Pipe "four-star recruit" to College recruiting
- Additionally link Point (basketball), and Rebound (basketball)
College career
- Pipe "labrum" to glenoid labrum or write it out entirely
- Link Assist (basketball) and Steal (basketball)
- "game winning three-pointer" → "game-winning three-pointer"
- Spell out and link 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
- "junior due to playing behind" → "junior, with his playing time limited by competition with"
- It should be made explicit that his junior season was halted due to the COVID-19 pandemic, with a link to Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on sports. I'm working on an example of that right now in the college career section of Tyrese Maxey
- Did he enroll in a graduate program for that fifth year, or is he still an undergraduate?
- "surpassed the 1,000 point threshold" → "passed 1,000 career collegiate points"
- When did he return from the groin injury?
National team career
- Who did the USA beat in the bronze medal match?
Career statistics
- Good
Personal life
- Where was he participating in the protests?
- "connects" → "which connects"
- What year did he graduate from Seton Hall?
References
- Incorrect link noted above
- In [3] and [5], "Appoquinimink School District" currently utilizes the "publisher" parameter when it should be "via" – the former implies that the School District publishes The News Journal, while the latter says that the article was reprinted by the district
- Per MOS:ALLCAPS, the all-caps portion of the headline in [5] should be changed to title case
- Anything from The News Journal and Asbury Park Press needs a parameter added for "|url-access=limited", meaning that you get limited free articles
General comments
- Image is properly licensed and relevant
- No stability concerns in the revision history
- Copyvio score looks good
Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 17:27, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: I have addressed your concerns. Let me know if there are more issues, and feel free to make some minor edits if necessary. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 02:18, 2 March 2022 (UTC)