Talk:Nieuport Triplane/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:44, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this one, comments will follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 09:44, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
Comments as follows:
Lead
- This reads OK
Background
- This reads OK
Nieuport 10 Triplane
- Do we have a time frame for construction; presumably it was in 1915 if this is when the staggered wing arrangement was invented?
- It was patented on 10 Jan 1916, so presumably built in 1915, but no date of first flight is available.
- The aircraft was tested by the French in 1916,: presumably this testing was done by the French Army Aviation? Also approx timeframe?
- No more specific date is known.
Nieuport 17 Triplane
- Trenchard ordered the aircraft transferred to home for more thorough testing which were : suggest swapping out 'home' for 'England'. Also 'were' for 'was'
- Good idea to be more specific, but I'm not sure what you comment about swapping "were" for "was" applies to.
- The summary report showed: I would add 'RFC' ahead of 'summary'
- Over all is one word.
Nieuport 17bis triplane
- The fighter retained the same layout as the earlier single seater.: I assume you mean wing layout. Also specify which single seater
- may have been because the biplane may have been : repeated 'may have been'
Bibliography
- The Owers ref lacks sufficient info for place of publication
Other stuff
- No dupe links
- Image tags look fine.
That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 10:21, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review this. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:38, 18 October 2023 (UTC)