Talk:Osney Martínez/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:54, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 07:27, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( lists ): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism ): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have suitable captions ):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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When an article has this few issues, it merits a quick pass where I make the copy changes! Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:53, 29 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

Add comma after Martínez limited himself to local politics until 2009
Should "in as much" be "inasmuch"?
Martínez reproached the MNR, and was reincorporated into its ranks Remove this comma (CinS). Also seems like reproached is not the right word in English; it would be the opposite. Maybe reapproached (which is what I tried)

Sourcing and spot checks

Earwig turns up no issues.

2: Gonzales Salas p. 29 checks out for all three claims it's used for. Y
9: esa actitud es calificada por sus disidentes como “funcional” al partido de gobierno. Y
10 La diputada Piérola, por su parte, mostró su disgusto ante estas designaciones, debido a que la “otra corriente” de CN en Diputados la designó a ella como su jefa de bancada. Y
16: It took a bit of poking around to figure out what was being said here, but I finally was able to piece it together in the source. Not terribly intuitive. Y
19: Percentage is correct. Y

Images

Just one, the CC-licensed headshot.

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