Talk:Papyrus Oxyrhynchus 581/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:41, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:41, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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    2.d checkY (Highest is 9.9, due to name of source, and incidental phrases.)
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Prose Suggestions

  • although the beginning has since been lost. Does this mean the beginning was lost before the Papyrus was found? If so, I suggest a change to although the beginning of the papyrus was lost before it was found.
  • It is the only of the Oxyrhynchus Papyri presently held in the university's collection suggest It is the only Oxyrhynchus Papyri currently held by the university's collection.
  • if not already orphaned or discarded does discarded here mean left to die? If so I would recommend you specify that.
  • If this stipulation was transgressed, the typical punishment was confiscation of private property. to what extent? Would the slave be taken? Would a certain value worth of property be taken?
  • Financial declaration of slaving sales should this be slave sales, or does source use slaving sales?
  • @Curlymanjaro: That is all my comments. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:43, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Done; thanks so much for your comments. Curlymanjaro (talk) 19:49, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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