Talk:Persona 2: Innocent Sin/GA1

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (

   lists

   ):

   "The original version was not localized for western territories, but the PSP version was released" - however

   "Persona 2: Innocent Sin is a role-playing game where the player takes control of a group of High School students" - should high school be capitalised here?

   Personally I would rephrase "Innocent Sin began development after the release and success of Persona" to Development of Innocent Sin began after the release and success of Persona

   "The original audio was lauded by Bartholow, saying the voice acting" - stating

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

   References check out OK, reliable sources, no evidence of OR

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   Neutral

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Stable, no edit warring

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have

   suitable captions

   ):

   No images used

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

This article meets the GA criteria and I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, so I'll pass it now. Well done! JAGUAR  11:19, 9 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Whoa, that was fast! Thank you for the review! (although I was not the one who wrote the article - that honor goes to

talk 11:24, 9 November 2015 (UTC)[reply

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