Talk:Pikes Hotel/GA1

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talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 April 2013 (UTC)[reply

Yachtsman and former hat maker Pike led a very colourful life, which had already seen him shipwrecked in the Caribbean, injured in a bobsleigh accident, serving in the military, indulge in heavy drinking, and married and divorced three times.

What this means? How this is related to the history?

A brief background of his colourful life I think is important for understanding the colorful history of the hotel. The hotel history is closely related to his personality and the hedonism at the hotel. ♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 21:50, 21 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

According to me, the Description of video is not necessary.

I've trimmed it a bit, but I think the context is relevant.

Pike who described Mercury as "the most beautiful person I've ever met in my life. So entertaining and generous." Is it a Biographical page of Mercury?

Trimmed that out and the stuff about him seeking comfort, but the party details are relevant to the hotel and are interesting.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 21:55, 21 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

At many places, it sounds like a biographical page of Pike (person) in the history section.
Overall: The article meets the GA criteria
talk 21:21, 21 April 2013 (UTC)[reply
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WP:WIAGA

for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
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B. Focused:
Is it neutral
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Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales
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B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions
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Overall:
Pass or Fail:

The article meets the criteria. Hence, passing it.

talk 02:37, 22 April 2013 (UTC)[reply

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