Talk:Police (Northern Ireland) Act 2000/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will be reviewing this article as part of the

GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 20:21, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply
]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (
    lists
    )    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (
    focused
    )    :
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have
    suitable captions
    )    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

  • The lead is on the short side. Please expand it to cover the other major points mentioned in the article

Background

  • "During The Troubles, they had been accused" - by whom?
  • "when going through Parliament.[6][2]" - refs in numerical order please

Name of the force

  • The acronyms of Police Service of Northern Ireland should be in brackets on the first instance of its mentioning
  • "Following Conservative Party pressure," - how about Following pressure from the Conservative Party instead?

Recruitment

  • "It stated that the force's size should be reduced by 4,500 officers." - why was this the case?
  • "the Royal Ulster Constabulary had a 9–1" - the hyphen should be a en dash per
    MOS:DASH
  • The % symbol is better off written as per cent per
    MOS:PERCENT
  • The acronyms of the Gaelic Athletic Association should be in brackets

References

  • References 5, 7, 18, 19, 21 and 22 are missing the publication date
  • Reference 10 is missing the second author of the article
  • References 13 and 21 are missing the author(s) of the pieces
  • The publication date for Reference 20 is incorrect

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 12:46, 13 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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