Talk:Rusco Tower/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:30, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
This article looks interesting, I'll give this one a review. Hog Farm Bacon 16:30, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- Lead
- Is there a link for Bombie?
- Bombie is a disambiguation page for a couple of Thomas MacLellan's family members (one of whom is also called Thomas Maclellan of Bombie - later generation, not the same chap); I could link it to Clan MacLellan is you think that would be helpful for readers?
- Interior
- What are the second floor and the attic subdivided into?
- I assume they're bedrooms and possibly toilet facilities, but the source isn't specific - it just says they've been subdivided. I could add something like 'into a number of smaller rooms' if you like?
More to come later. Hog Farm Bacon 16:41, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- History
- What year did the Porter incident occur in?
- Annoyingly, the source does not say. I assume it must have been between 1511, when he was pardoned, and 1523, but I can't be more specific based on the sources I've got. Reid is citing primary archival sources for this story - it's beyond my ability to access those and try to work out the dates.
- External links
- The external link is used as a reference, so it is superfluous as an external link. Best to remove it
DoneFair point - removed.
- References
- Be consistent with your use of Title Case, put the obituary and Lindsay into title case
- Done
- Reid got an OCLC?
- Done
This article's in great shape. Good job, not much to pick on here. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 18:01, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Hog Farm Thanks for taking a look - see above, I've done what I can, but a few of your points are trickier, let me know what you think I should so. Cheers GirthSummit (blether) 15:33, 21 August 2020 (UTC)