Talk:Sadie Sink/GA1

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Nominator: Pamzeis (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( lists ): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism ): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have suitable captions ):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Take a fresh look at some of the paragraphs, which could benefit from variance in sentence length and sometimes sentence starts. Only a few grammar errors. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:56, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pamzeis Just making sure: you think you've tackled everything? Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:59, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for not responding earlier, but I believe I've resolved all your comments. Lemme know if there's anything else!​ Pamzeis (talk) 05:01, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

• She began acting at age seven in local theater productions, and played the title role in Annie (2012–14) One subject, no comma
  WP:CINS
• They would often recreate scenes from High School Musical (2006); and watch Broadway plays and Tony Award performances. Incorrect use of a semicolon
• Try and vary the starts of sentences: sometimes three sentences in a row start "She" or "Sink"
• Reflow some paragraphs that feel a little jammed with unrelated content
• while the Los Angeles Times's Justin Chang found her emotional intensity "impressive", but felt her role was poorly written Drop the comma

Sourcing and spot checks

• 6: Glamour story lists siblings and contains the "step out of being a kid on screen" quote. Y
• 37: IGN comment is correctly reproduced. Y
• 45: W story on Sink's return to S3 of Stranger Things. Y
• 48 + 49: Sink joining the second half; the first ref mentions the trilogy more. Y
• 54: It only fuels Ziggy’s anger at the world and herself, and Sink’s intense performance gets a great deal of volume out of this one note. Y
• 57: Looks like this sentence really could stand with only 58, but no issues with the ref if needed elsewhere for this topic. Y
• 65: Across nine episodes, which were released in two parts on May 27 and July 1... Y
• 68: stars like Millie Bobby Brown and Sadie Sink (the clear standout of the fourth season) remained snubbed one of several acclaim examples Y
• 71 as a citebundle of 67–70, instead reviewing
  • 70: While Stranger Things is led by an ensemble of fantastic young talent, Sink comes out as such a clear breakout that the strangest thing of all would be her not getting some serious recognition come award season. Y
• 74: Saturn Award nomination. Y
• 101: I made the switch almost five years ago after I worked with Woody Harrelson on a movie. He’s a very passionate vegan and his entire family is vegan as well, so by spending time with them, I was able to learn that a vegan lifestyle is totally doable and it’s not as hard as it may seem. Y
• 122: Woods Hole win for Dear Zoe. Y

Earwig flags a few quotes, but nothing of concern.

Images

There are three images, all CC-licensed from various festivals. Encouragement: Alt text of "Refer to caption" probably suffices.