Talk:Salem station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 17:01, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

1.

Is North River (Massachusetts Bay) the North River in the station layout section? If so, it should be linked
- Nope, different river. There's at least three North Rivers in Massachusetts - such imagination!
"After the railroads from Boston to Lowell, Worcester, and Providence were chartered in 1830 and 1831," - Wikilink the cities not already linked
- Done
"On June 16, 1846, the stockholders authorized the sale" - Whose stockholder's?
- Done
" Marblehead service was halved to one daily round trip then, and cut entirely on June 14, 1959." - This needs rephrasing
- Done
"Construction of $2.5 million overpass to carry Bridge Street" - Needs an "a"
- Done
"over the Danvers Branch and the Topsfield Branch[39] This was" - There's a period missing in here
- Done

2.

The daily parking fee doesn't seem to be cited anywhere
- Done
"bridge began on December 1, 1985" - Maybe I misread the source, but I only say the month, not the day in the source
- It's in the bolded title of the entry
Ref 47 shouldn't have the titles in all caps
- Done
"Construction on the garage and station began in June 2013." - This is supported by a reference from March of that year. Since delays are possible in construction projects, it would be best to have a source that demonstrates that the construction actually did begin in June, besides just planned to begin.
- Partly done Lacking any other source to support it, I've removed the line.
Ref 2 needs an accessdate
- Done
Add an edition, if known, to the House of the Seven Gables ref. The date is given as 1893, and the book was published in 1851, so we're dealing with a later edition here
- Done No edition info, but added orig-year parameter
Refs 48 and 49 shouldn't have the titles in all caps
- Done
Not all of the online refs have accessdate= parameters, these should be added.
- Done I believe I've added these for all relevant refs (recent news stories, etc). Access date isn't relevant for archived sources, dated PDFs, etc.
Spot check of refs is clean, as is the Earwig report

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Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 23:55, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: Thanks for the review! I believe I've fixed everything. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 01:02, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I believe that's everything. Promoting. Hog Farm (talk) 04:05, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]