Talk:Svetlana Kuznetsova/GA4

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GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 14:55, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • I will review this soon.--
    WP:FOUR) 14:55, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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All images need {{

WP:FOUR) 04:58, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Done--
TCN 16:22, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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The following issues seem to remain unresolved from GA2 by reviewer

WP:FOUR) 22:07, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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  • Done
  • Done
  • Change they to "she and Navratilova".--
    WP:FOUR) 13:16, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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  • I am pretty sure it is "at the doubles". Also I think you can say both "at Wimbledon" or "in Wimbledon", but I am not a native speaker...
  • Done
  • Thanks, done
WP:LEAD
  • "and never broke this record" should probably be something like, "which remains her career-high"

Note: I have been making copy edits to the beginning of the article (Lead, Early life, Career: 2000, 2001-2002 and 2003) to assist GoP in his efforts but realize that TonyTheTiger is now conducting his review. To prevent further risk of our edits & review getting their wires crossed I'll wait until the outcome of the review before making any further edits. Two final observations for GoP: there are a few deadlinks and the subsection "Playing Style" does not belong in the "Off-Court" section.--Wolbo (talk) 14:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If your copyedit will take less than a week or so, I would prefer if you complete it before I finish my review.--
WP:FOUR) 15:00, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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(2x ce) Thanks for your copyedits. I will fix these issues. Regards.--
TCN 15:01, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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I have expanded the playing style, fixed the dead links and formatted the last sections.--
TCN 15:58, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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TTT, I think it would probably be best if I finish my 'non-review review/copyedit' and it should not take long at all, certainly not a week. GoP, is that OK with you or do you want to proceed directly with the GA review? As you are the one who requested the GA review I'll leave the choice up to you.--Wolbo (talk) 16:03, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I am a participant at
TCN 16:33, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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The copyeditor was already ahead of where I am in the article. I am still working on the LEAD. Even without a copyedit, I am not sure this would pass within the next week. I have not looked at /GA3 and have only read the LEAD other than look at /GA2. Are these your only potential points?--
WP:FOUR) 17:04, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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I have
TCN 17:29, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Try to get your points with Redding. I am not sure this one will make it.--
WP:FOUR) 18:04, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Finalized my review and (significant) copy edit session. --Wolbo (talk) 23:41, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
2000
ITF Junior Career
  • "Kuznetsova was ranked in the top 900, receiving her first ranking of 889" when?--
    WP:FOUR) 22:25, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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2001–2002
2003
2004
2005
2006
2007
2008
2009
2010
2011
2012
Fed Cup
Coaches
Appearances in video games

Review of progress

  • I count 8 weeks at number 3 (7 consecutive) not 5.
  • You are correct. Done.
  • I would like clarification if the victory over Anastasia Myskina in 2003 was the best (highest opponent) up to that point in her career.--
    WP:FOUR) 18:12, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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The third point is not a dealbreaker.--

WP:FOUR) 18:12, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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I am also not pressing for a mixed doubles record.--
WP:FOUR) 21:27, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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Great work. Good Luck in the

WP:FOUR) 18:04, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply
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