Talk:Swift Justice/GA1
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Reviewer: Damien Linnane (talk · contribs) 00:59, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
- "Wolf said the network considered this decision" - this wording seems a bit awkward. How about, "Wolf said UPN executives later considered this cancellation to be a mistake ...", or something similar
- Revised. Thank you for the suggestion. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Revised. Thank you for the suggestion.
- 'Prostitution ring' just redirects to Prostitution, so I'd probably just link to that directly.
- Good point. Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Good point. Revised.
- "tortures his victims by hitting them with golf balls" - can this be clarified? I'm curious if nothing else.
- Revised. According to the source, he would tie his victims up and then drive golf balls into them. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Revised. According to the source, he would tie his victims up and then drive golf balls into them.
- described as "all synthesizers and percussion" - the source seems to think this is a positive thing. I think the fact the percussion and synthesizers were reviewed favorably should be mentioned.
- Included. Not sure how I missed that one lol. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Included. Not sure how I missed that one lol.
- "following viewer complaints about its violence" - the first source also mentions complaints from advertisers; I'd mention that too. I can't access the second source but perhaps check it and see if this can be expanded on at all
- Added. Unfortunately, HighBeams seems to be gone now, but the complaints were rather generic (i.e. the show was too violent). Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Added. Unfortunately, HighBeams seems to be gone now, but the complaints were rather generic (i.e. the show was too violent).
- I assume the series was never released on VHS/DVD etc. Is it available on any streaming service?
- It has not been released on VHS/DVD, and to the best of my knowledge it is not available on streaming either. Most of the episodes are available on YouTube (I think there are only two or so missing), but they can obviously not be referenced or cited here as they are illegal uploads. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- It has not been released on VHS/DVD, and to the best of my knowledge it is not available on streaming either. Most of the episodes are available on YouTube (I think there are only two or so missing), but they can obviously not be referenced or cited here as they are illegal uploads.
That's all I found. Looks really good as always. On hold. Damien Linnane (talk) 00:59, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! This is a rather short and silly article, but I am planning on trying it again through the FAC process. Yet another one of my UPN projects lol. I hope you have a great rest of the year. Aoba47 (talk) 03:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Passing. :) Damien Linnane (talk) 01:47, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 02:12, 29 December 2018 (UTC)]
- Thank you!
- Thank you for the review! This is a rather short and silly article, but I am planning on trying it again through the FAC process. Yet another one of my UPN projects lol. I hope you have a great rest of the year.