Talk:The Alliance (The Office)/GA1

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 17:08, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Images, dabs, and external links look good
• Is that the correct production code?
• "The party planning scene, which Jenna Fischer named her favorite scene and called "longest most horrible meeting of all time," was almost entirely ad-libbed.[1][6]" - Could use some tweaking (a word or two are missing, I think)
• Which scenes did Wilmore call his favorite? It's not very clear
• As with "Basketball", this article could really use some more reviews. I recommend searching for others

I believe that's it. Will place the article on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 21:43, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I found another review and I tried to make the wording clearer on all the prose issues. And yeah, that's the production code. Kind of a stupid number.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:20, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article looks good. Happy to pass for GA! Ruby 2010/2013 01:58, 9 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]