Talk:The Music of Grand Theft Auto V/GA1

Prose

Lead

• The "producers who collaborated with each-other during Grand Theft Auto V's development" bit would read better as simply "producers who collaborated with each-other during the game's development"
• The "music had been appropriated effectively for Grand Theft Auto V's gameplay" bit would ready better as something like "music had been appropriated effectively for gameplay".

Background and recording

• "Early in Grand Theft Auto V's development" → "Early in the game's development"
• "'Welcome to Los Santos', Grand Theft Auto V's main theme" → "'Welcome to Los Santos', the game's main theme"

Sourcing

Background and recording

• In the third paragraph, ref#3 (Polygon) doesn't need to be used more than once in a row per WP:OVERCITE- it's currently being used twice in a row after ref#5 (Clash)
• More WP:OVERCITE in fourth paragraph- just use ref#5 (Clash) at the end of the paragraph

Coverage

• Could you perhaps find another paragraph's worth or two of reviews from critics?
• Is any information available on commercial performance?

Neutrality

• No problems here

Stability

• No problems here

GA Result

• If these are all addressed within the next seven days, I will pass the GAN.

I've gone through and addressed most of these problems; the two comments you made for "Coverage" will be looked into. I'm sure we can find some more information to add. --