Talk:The Otto Show/GA1

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Reviewer:

lack of surprise 02:23, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Hi, I've reviewed this in accordance with April's GAN Backlog Elimination Drive, and have placed it on hold until the below issue can be fixed. Good luck.

lack of surprise 02:23, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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Very few issues here. In Lead:

  • Add the overall number of the episode (i.e., and 57th episode overall)
  • The current intro is the one used on pretty much every other episode page. It's overall number isn't really that relevant, and it's already in the infobox.
  • Wikilink to Bart.
  • Done.
  • "and Spinal Tap was ranked as the 18th best guest appearance by IGN." -> "guest appearance on the show by IGN."
  • Done.

In Plot:

  • Wikilink to Snake.
  • Done.
  • Wikilink to Marge.
  • Wikilink to Homer.
  • Homer and Marge are already linked in the lead.
  • "even considers faking his own death." → "and even considers[...]"
  • Done.

Final say

Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion0422 00:17, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Passing.
lack of surprise 15:56, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply
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