Talk:Tropical Storm Sanba (2018)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 19:37, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will do.

• "After traversing the Philippine islands," capital i.
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  • Done ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:56, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• "the JTWC determined that the system had opened up into a wave by 18:00 UTC on February 13.[9]" seems too much jagron. What is a "wave"? (Yes I know but the average reader isn't me).
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  • Changed to "circulation was no longer closed". ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:56, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• In the MH, you refer to "PAGASA" with a "the" while the in the impact you include a "the". Which one is it?
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  • Fixed, I think ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:56, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• "Shortly after Sanba's formation, the National Weather Service in Guam issued a tropical storm watch for western parts of Yap State, encompassing Fais, Ulithi, Yap, and Ngulu.[22][23] T" link to
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  • Done ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:56, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great job all in all, BTW.

• Thanks again YE. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:56, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]