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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 20:32, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing this now... Heaven forbid a mishap like this from occurring again. NoahTalk 20:32, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon season
Could you please provide a citation for this? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- I was not able to provide citations for "
The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon season
". Instead, i changed it intoThe fourth and the last tropical cyclone to be formed in June of the
9thx my edits 06:52, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]
- I was not able to provide citations for "
- Link wind shear in the lead. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
- Done 9thx my edits 07:42, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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over 30,000 individuals lost their homes. Overall, damage in the country was minor, however.
These two statements seem to contradict one another. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:20, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Satellite imagery
Link. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 07:43, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Satellite imagery showed signs of a well-defined low-level circulation and the disturbance was situated along with persistent convection, and the disturbance was situated in a weakly divergent environment aloft
The last two items could be combined or this could be split into two sentences. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 07:21, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]
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of winds of 65 km/h (40 mph)
I would change this to "of 65 km/h (40 mph) winds to improve flow a bit. Also, I assume these were 10-minute sustained as well, correct? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- I don't think it's a 10-minute sustained winds, since that came from JTWC report (JTWC uses 1-minute sustained winds). Otherwise, Done 9thx my edits 07:41, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
- I don't think it's a 10-minute sustained winds, since that came from JTWC report (JTWC uses 1-minute sustained winds). Otherwise, Done
Tracking west-northwestward around another upper-level anticyclone that was previously following Typhoon Ofelia and later merged with a subtropical ridge to its north,[1] Percy was upgraded into a severe tropical storm on June 22 by the JMA.
Oh boy, that's a lot there. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- It took me long to guess the problem, but regardless i'm Done with this. 9thx my edits 13:20, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]
- It took me long to guess the problem, but regardless i'm Done with this.
with the JMA subsequently following suit
When did this occur? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- I believe it's in the morning of June 24. Done 9thx my edits 07:02, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
- I believe it's in the morning of June 24. Done
JTWC estimated that Ofelia obtained
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Dvorak estimate of T6.0
Could you list the wind values for that estimate? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 07:06, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Airline services in and out Yap was halted
--> were halted. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:27, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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the island of Ngulu Atoll bore the brought
Did you mean bore the brunt? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:27, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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several houses lost their roof and power, television, and radio lines were downed
", and television and radio lines were downed." NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Radio does not have lines. Television might if it is cable. · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 03:57, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
- I changed the order of the words per JTWC ATCR, and with the input of Peter that there is no radio lines. as such,
Meanwhile, radio towers, power lines and television lines were downed as several houses lost their roofs.
This is definitely Done either way.9thx my edits 06:52, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]
The typhoon posed enough of a threat to Hong Kong to warrant a No 1. hurricane signal briefly, but such signal was dropped within 24 hours, Nevertheless, a pressure of 999.4 mbar (29.51 inHg) was measured at the Hong Kong Royal Observatory early on June 29
This should be split after 24 hours. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Of course. Done 9thx my edits 06:51, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
- Of course. Done
High Island received 245 mm (9.6 in)
I would add "of rain" after the measurement. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Okay. I did that... Done 9thx my edits 06:51, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
- Okay. I did that... Done
Two other villages lost power. Eleven people also had to be evacuated.
Could these possibly be merged? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:50, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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slight damage was to crops.
Delete "was". NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:50, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Floodwaters there was up to 2 m (6.6 ft) deep
Should be "were". NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:49, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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- I would round the acres measurement to the nearest thousand. Additionally, there is one instance where acres comes before the hectares. NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
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tens of millions in damage
USD? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:49, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Roughly 20 km (12 mi) of a highway were destroyed.
This is similar to the farmland sentences before it. It should be "was destroyed". NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Done 9thx my edits 06:55, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
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Damage was estimated at US$28 million
Is there an estimate in Yuan? NoahTalk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)- Using current estimate it's about 190 million yuan. Not sure about 1990 USD to yuan. I'll added it under the note that this is adjusted for inflation. Done. 9thx my edits 07:04, 21 September 2020 (UTC)]
- Using current estimate it's about 190 million yuan. Not sure about 1990 USD to yuan. I'll added it under the note that this is adjusted for inflation. Done.
- @Yellow Evan: Just a reminder since it has been two weeks since the review was posted. NoahTalk 16:35, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
Done
@9thx my edits 13:21, 25 September 2020 (UTC)]