Talk:War Machine/GA1

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:55, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( lists ): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism ): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have suitable captions ):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Pretty good-looking, if hard to spot-check in its entirety given the source mix. Ping me when ready. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:44, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Your copy is superbly clean. Not much to fix.

Lead

• "Stand alone" should be one word

Publication history

• Rhodes was first portrayed using Iron Man armor in Iron Man #169 (1983) when he had to fight a villain in the stead of a drunk and defeated Tony Stark. Add a comma after (1983)
• This series also featured Deathlok and Cable, and it ran for twenty-five issues across two years.Something is missing as a causal link. Maybe This series, also featuring Deathlok and Cable, ran for twenty-five issues across two years.
• writer Christos Gage wrote issues #33–35 of Iron Man: Director of S.H.I.E.L.D. in which War Machine replaced Iron Man as the main character add a comma after S.H.I.E.L.D.

Characterization

• He believes that the role of superheroes goes beyond fighting supervillains, and that they should also take action against global problems such as world hunger and oppressive governments. That's a
  WP:CINS
  comma that should go.

Supporting characters

• Danvers' return
  MOS:'S
  should be "Danvers's"

Sourcing and spot checks

Harv error: Zehr 2011 does not have a citation to point to.

Spot checking is tough with this one because some of the most-used refs (Chambliss) are not easily available. Chambliss is really frequently called, so this is a bit frustrating. I had to settle for half of the spot checks I'd normally make... I don't have any qualms with what I've found, though.

• 29: War Machine steps in for the fallen Iron Man ... In the past, Rhodey's always been the guy who goes into battle himself-sure, he's led men into combat, but he's never been the kind of man to sit behind the lines making the big decisions. This checks out. Y
• 43: Wizard review checks out.
• 54: Lists Cheadle's appearances. Y

Images

A cover with NFUR is supplied and justified. Encouragement: Add alt text.

Sammi Brie, I've addressed the issues you listed. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 04:53, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

And Zehr checks out now that it's inserted. Everything looks good. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:08, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]