User:Jlsenn/Evaluate an Article

Source: Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia.

Which article are you evaluating?

Equestrian

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

I am knowledgeable about this field and wanted to see how clear and factual this information is.


Evaluate the article

Lead Section

  • Provides definition but could go into more detail about what all is considered to be "equestrian" such as the various disciplines
  • Too short; not enough information

Content

  • Gives bullet points of examples
    • More detail would be beneficial
  • Good variety but no real weight to the information
  • Little to no information about this topic

Tone and Balance

  • No tone as the wiki page is too short and too little information

Sources and References

  • No sources section, but links provides throughout the page.
  • Essential seems to be a page to link you to other pages with actual information
    • If this wiki page should stay on Wiki, I believe it should be able to stand alone and have actual content, rather than only string into other Wiki pages

Organization and Writing Quality

  • Very straight forward and organized as expected
  • Good use of bullet points, but sub-categories could also be useful
  • No outline
  • Only 3 categories

Images and Media

  • No images or media directly on this page
  • Could be beneficial to help one understand the idea

Talk Page Discussion

  • Only links have been added
  • No actual talking points
    • Is within the WikiProject Disambiguation

Overall Impressions

  • Needs a LOT of work if it is to stand alone as a wiki page
  • When researching on Wiki, it seems that other equestrian pages are more beneficial and provide much more detail-if so, why have another page talking about the same thing?
  • Overall, article needs work if it is to remain as a stand-alone
    • Last edited in 2010
  • Article is not near completion; poorly developed and needs to be redone for better education of the sport


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