User:Plantbella/Evaluate an Article

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Which article are you evaluating?

Marie Bonaparte

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

I have a basic knowledge of Marie Bonaparte's sexual research. She's important because she was one of the original feminist sexual scholars.


Evaluate the article

Lead

  • I feel like Marie Bonaparte's relationship to Napoleon Bonaparte should be addressed within the first sentence, and her description of being "closely linked" to Sigmund Freud is a little vague and could be moved down.
  • Description of major sections isn't there, but there is a table of contents.
  • Includes only info. from the article.
  • It is a little overly detailed.

Content

  • Content is relevant to the topic
  • Could be updated with the relevance of her sexual research in a present context
  • Content does tackle historic women in STEM! So yay.

Tone

  • Well balanced
  • Not a lot of room for controversy or conflicting views in this topic, it's simply factual

Sources

  • Diverse range of sources, male and female authors, books, webpages, images
  • Current sources
  • Everything is cited
  • Sources could be looked at more closely for more information (for example, I have read Bonk, and it includes much more context and nuance about Marie Bonaparte than is mentioned in this article
  • Links work

Organization

  • Clear, well organized, no glaring grammatical errors

Images

  • Relevant, add to the article
  • Adhere to copyright guidelines
  • Captioned well -- captions provide good image descriptions

Talk Page

  • Fact-checking and asking for advice on sourcing
  • B-class low importance
  • Editors share opinions in talk page, but remain civil

Overall

  • Basically complete
  • Strong in that it has a good number of sources
  • Could contain more about sexual research and its outcomes
  • Well developed