User talk:AngusWOOF/Archive 21

WP:GNG news articles that give significant coverage to Singh's career then that can be addressed. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 15:03, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

Could you review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ekalavya_Hansaj again? You asked me to provide three best sources. Here they are: https://www.fortuneindia.com/technology/global-advertising-leader-ekalavya-hansaj-launches-proprietary-fund-that-uses-ai-to-support-advertising-campaigns/104984 https://www.zeebiz.com/companies/news-meet-ekalavya-hansaj-the-brain-behind-incredibly-popular-quarterly-global-and-its-brands-144684 https://www.ibtimes.sg/failures-eventually-led-entrepreneur-ekalavya-hansaj-success-54442 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anavya (talk • contribs) 03:19, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

IB Times is not reliable per

WP:RSP. Do not use Times of India either. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 17:27, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Anavya has since been banned for sockpuppetry. No further action on this. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 20:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

• Usmanbhat (talk · contribs)
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Hello i got message just one minute ago for my article it shows my article is copyright so i am telling to you this is not copyright by google or any else where this is my own blog and i have also my website there is also available this http://medicalnursingeducation.school.blog/2020/11/05/7-proven-health-benefits-of-collard-greenskoshur-haakh-according-to-nutritionists__trashed/

Usmanbhat (talk) 18:43, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Usmanbhat, even if it's from your own website, you can't copy-paste such information over to Wikipedia and assume it can become an article. Also the verbiage of the 7 benefits are coming straight from that Prevention article. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:55, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:NSONG. If the EP is popuular enough to get reviews in Rolling Stone and others, it should have a charting soon if you can wait a few more days. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 20:34, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

AngusWOOF I certainly can, but I'm a bit frustrated here. It seems as though each time I satisfy something one reviewer asks for, a different reviewer asks for something new. I really only wanted to establish a stub for the rest of the community to add to. I've provided references from reputable sources and pointed out how the album has already satisfied notability guidelines. Why does the goal line seem to keep moving for me? 🤷‍♂️ Souldier77 (talk) 20:57, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Heaux Tales (album). AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 00:10, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Souldier77, I am requesting to move that article to Heaux Tales. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:14, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

It's been moved. Please let us AFC reviewers know when you're done bringing over whatever edits you have on the draft to there so we can make it a redirect. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 20:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Thank you for reviewing my page. I am representing the ACSF and i am volunteering to create an article for them. I have been notified that there is COI and so I have added the disclose template in my page. would this solve the problem or is there anything else i need to do. I appreciate your help. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Esmaeili.nooshin (talk • contribs) 01:07, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Esmaeili.nooshin, you need to provide references from outside the organization. Try rewriting the article without using their website and by using news and journal articles that discuss the organization. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:20, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Quantum Leap episodes

I'm feeling pretty nervous about making new articles. I'm not very good at finding good references, so could you please help? Sincerely, Cooldude197 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cooldude197 (talk • contribs) 19:00, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Hollywood Reporter, TVLine, Vulture (website), Paste (magazine) AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 19:59, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

I've made a new draft Draft:Lee Harvey Oswald (Quantum Leap Episode) and was hoping if you could review it. I also used one of the websites you recommended. Sincerely, Cooldude197 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cooldude197 (talk • contribs) 21:19, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

List of Quantum Leap episodes. You need to find more analysis and coverage to show it is notable independent of the list. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 22:16, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:GoNoodle

I've made a Draft for gonoodle and was hoping if you could review it. Can you? Sincerely, User:Cooldude197 — Preceding undated comment added 15:55, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:GNG AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 17:21, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

I noticed that you declined my GoNoodle article. I need a partner to help me edit. Could you be mine? Sincerely, Cooldude197 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cooldude197 (talk • contribs) 16:41, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Did you read

WP:YFA? When you make article drafts the subject needs to be notable and be supported by reliable sources independent of the subject. If the topic is already described in another Wikipedia article you can add to that instead of making a separate article. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 17:30, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Kahoot (Type of quiz)

I think I used pretty good and reliable references. Can you double-check for me? (PS I used arcticstartup and NBC) Article link: Draft:Kahoot (Type of quiz) Sincerely, Cooldude197

	You're just what Wikipedia needs!
	You're the best! Cooldude197 (talk) 19:56, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft: Dalmatian Molly

I have an article for you. (Draft:Dalmatian Molly) and was hoping if you could review it. Also, remember that you are my favorite user and I will never stop liking you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cooldude197 (talk • contribs) 21:12, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Puppy for Hanukkah

I need this article reviewed Draft:Puppy for Hanukkah can you review it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cooldude197 (talk • contribs) 23:59, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi! Can you check my splitting proposal here (

I tweaked the links and also publicized the request to

WP:DOG AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 20:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Thank you! Repassyz (talk) 12:50, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi your comment was there is nothing on any article me working in IT. Please see below links it says clearly I am an IT Professional in several interviews by news channels and even the company itself making an interview about me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RdJZqIuDzKc https://www.indiatoday.in/television/reality-tv/story/who-is-javed-khan-all-you-want-to-know-about-india-s-got-talent-8-winner-1419906-2018-12-30 ( point no. 1 and 3 clearly states Javed works in IT as well) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Javed khan39 (talk • contribs) 08:26, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:NAU AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 08:47, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

AngusWOOF : Then why you mentioned that "you don't see anywhere mention about me going in to IT"  ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Javed khan39 (talk • contribs)

Javed khan39, you need to connect the references to the verbiage in the article. The whole Early Life section has no references. If the India Today article talks about your career in IT, then you can use that one. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:31, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi, my name is zeusafrous and I have a article for you Sincerely, Zeusafrous Draft:Francois Clerc — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 15:39, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:ENT at all. Any starring / major roles in major productions? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 21:18, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

I made new edits to that Francois Clerc page. Can you check? Well, he was rumored to be an extra in the movie King Kong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 21:25, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Zeusafrous, extras aren't starring roles. What about lead roles in films or productions? Where are the news articles to support those? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:32, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

User:AngusWOOF, the reason I'm not putting those up is because he was in the 1800s and when he was in the early 1900s he just starred extras! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 21:34, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Zeusafrous, I'm not seeing much notability outside that one film where he stars as the gardener. Are there other films where he has a lead role? Are there news articles that focus on Clerc specifically? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:25, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Got an article

I've got an article for you! Draft:The Seeker — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 16:30, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Zeusafrous, what about it? It's a fictional element in a Choose Your Own Adventure book that doesn't even have its own article. Why would it need to have its own article? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:33, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Leon Trotobas (Actor)

I have an article for you: Draft:Leon Trotobas (Actor) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 21:29, 12 January 2021 (UTC)

Zeusafrous, there's nothing to show this actor has independent notability from the one film he was in. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:44, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

I think you're gonna want to see this

Draft:Giant Sicilian pizza — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 15:43, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:WITHIN before creating any more articles. If the subject can be described within another article it should be a redirect, not a separate article. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 17:44, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

I think I have a new idea. For the giant sicilian pizza, could I add a new section on Big Mama's & Papa's Pizzeria about products and then I could put up Giant Sicilian pizza on that article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeusafrous (talk • contribs) 14:31, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Zeusafrous, it's already listed in the Products section. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:14, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Please could you re-review the page on "Digga D". Just wanted to say there are no tabloid references and I have included charts to show he is worthy of having an artist page on wiki. Yes, his collective should have a page as several rappers are famous from 'CGM' but just because there isn't one shouldn't mean his page can't be uploaded. Please let me know how I can improve his page further. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TwoTrappy22 (talk • contribs) 16:02, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, another editor has created Digga D in the mainspace. You can add your stuff to that article where appropriate. Please see my feedback on the draft though. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:33, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, see also the news articles on the talk page for Digga D. You can use that to beef up the sections. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 19:06, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

Can you please delete this draft page? There is now a page published as you are aware hence this draft is obsolete, thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:23C4:7C03:C500:252E:423B:90CF:B7AC (talk) 00:44, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

2A00:23C4:7C03:C500:252E:423B:90CF:B7AC, I'm waiting for TwoTrappy22 to merge what they need to the main page and then it can be redirected. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:48, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Wow, very professional and considerate, I'm impressed! Sorry, I wrote the comment above, didn't realise that I wasn't signed in, still getting used to wiki. Appreciate you making sure the hard work I put into didn't just go to waste. I must say you do make good comments and are objective with everyone. You deserve to be a moderator/reviewer! — Preceding unsigned comment added by TwoTrappy22 (talk • contribs) 01:08, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

2A00:23C4:7C03:C500:252E:423B:90CF:B7AC and TwoTrappy22, I've redirected the draft page. Please note that when you add to the Digga D article, you should not copy over the same verbiage as what was quoted in the news and magazine articles. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 01:10, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

But a lots of it is re-worded and compiled from several different sources, it took hours and my own knowledge to get the relevant details. It not just copied and paste, plus some are quotes, if you look into it you would see this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TwoTrappy22 (talk • contribs) 01:13, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, you had sentences like "He was fitted with a GPS tracker on his leg and was made to check in with probation every three hours - at 11am, 2pm, 5pm, 8pm and 11pm every day." that was directly copied from the BBC article without quoting. Also you can't use song lyrics to justify any statements. That would be original research. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 01:16, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Okay, ill fix those bits, your right but how I do I undo your deletion so I can edit my version. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TwoTrappy22 (talk • contribs) 01:26, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, there's a copy over at https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Digga_D&oldid=1000183861 but again, I would just do a little bit at a time and make sure whatever statements you make are supported by references. The verbiage on that version has too many statements that are copy-pasted or closely paraphrased from magazine and news articles so it's no good to restore that version back. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 01:30, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, please also note that associated acts are for long-term or recurring notable collaborations, not every single act he has worked with. Those who were already part of 1011 / CGM shouldn't be listed, and those who only have one or two collabs should not be listed. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 01:32, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

I literally fixed it all and it didn't save because there was a conflict due to probably what you put on my account because I unintentionally violated wiki by copying 2 lil sections which I thought it was fine if I cited them. Literally just lost another hour of editing, if only you just worked with me so I could have fixed it, instead of brashly deleted 3/4 of an article of an inexperienced wiki editor simply saying the whole thing was copy and paste when it clearly wasn't :/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by TwoTrappy22 (talk • contribs) 02:23, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

and I agree with ur point on associated acts but then it should just be 1011/CGM and Unknown T, not Russ he's irrelevant in the whole drill scene and only has one song with Digga.TwoTrappy22 (talk) 02:27, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, it looks like you found a spot where you can rewrite the article from. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 15:44, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

After taking on what you have said, I have rewritten part of the article and I have now also added all of his songs to his discovery. However the latter is now a issue as a user called dmirtis (see edits on Digga D) is accusing me of citing genius when I literally haven't. Please take a look so this can be resolved as he is being rather stubborn and at this rate I'm going to be banned when I literally trying my best to write a good comprehensive article on this artist. Thanks.TwoTrappy22 (talk) 17:11, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

• TwoTrappy22, it's "Drmies", and you literally did. Drmies (talk) 17:20, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

TwoTrappy22, please heed what the other editors are saying regarding the edits on the article. All statements need to be supported by references and should not be copy-pasted / closely paraphrased. The verbiage that sounds like someone's review needs to be attributed. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:20, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

I'm trying, so adding songs is verbiage??? and please in specific what is "copy and pasted" and I still can't see what is from genius sorry.TwoTrappy22 (talk) 17:29, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

• Click on the link "literally did". That is your diff, from your edit, and the "genius" in there is clear. In the references. Look for it. Drmies (talk) 21:31, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

My last thing in relation to this article, sorry if I've been a pain, is to restore the edit I did to the Discovery, and that only. I is comprehensive and complete and I see no reason why it can't stand.TwoTrappy22 (talk) 22:25, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Secondly what was wrong with this paragraph : He is considered one of UK drill's forefathers with his appearance on Next Up? in 2017^[1] - which remains his most streamed song on Spotify to date at around 50 million streams^{[citation needed]} - and his special on Mixtape Madness's Mad About Bars with Kenny Allstar, which are both widely esteemed and considered crucial in not only drill's growing popularisation in the UK and around the world but more pertinently UK's sub-genre UK drill differing from Chicago's, where drill music originates.^[2]

Particularly the end part is precise and key. Like why re-write it ???TwoTrappy22 (talk) 22:59, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Thirdly, the first part of you edit below is literally false, do your research or maybe don't change want was accurately written before.

The 1011 group often had trouble with the law. In July 2017, Digga D and four other members were arrested in a stop and search. Digga and 1011 were convicted of conspiracy to commit violent disorder, sentenced to a year in jail, and was given a Criminal Behaviour Order (CBO) in 2018 that required the group to have the Metropolitan Police's permission before releasing any new music, forbade them from using London postcodes, and banning references in lyrics to real-life incidents and people. The group's music videos were taken down. The group rebranded as CGM, which stands for Cherish God More.[3][4][5]TwoTrappy22 (talk) 23:02, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

You have literally ruined the article now, I hope your content now. You really make people want to spend time edit on wiki, nice. The article was good. Why are you changing and omitting certain parts to create an inaccurate and incomplete, vague article on a subject you are clearly not knowledgable on. Like I have followed this artist and genre for YEARS. While it is clear you have to cite be original etc., following wiki guidelines, you have completely changed the article now and are going completely beyond this. Do what you want, I don't care anymore, I genuinely hope you happy with yourself. smhTwoTrappy22 (talk) 23:09, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

Like I can't stress enough how incomplete his Discovery is. It is literally missing over half his songs. Yet my edit way back now, which you can verify all you want, literally included all his officially released song. Yet it was just deleted like that. Over an hour of work to compile that. The only thing wrong was that I don't know how to format it correctly. and still, no one cares just deleted.TwoTrappy22 (talk) 23:17, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

How is that ruined? I'm using the sources given: The Face, Vice, BBC. Some writers said he released singles in 2017, and others in 2018. The CBO took place in 2018. The Face says they were arrested in July 2017. GRM Daily's article on Next Up says nothing about "forefathers" and 50 million spotify views. Forefathers is from a different article, which is not cited. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 23:56, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

BBC and Guardian are saying the arrest took place on 9 November 2017. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 02:54, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

If there are any other details that need clarifying, let's discuss this further at the talk page for the artist. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 02:54, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

As for Chicago drill and UK drill, what does it have to do specifically with Digga D? That can be detailed in the drill music articles. Same with its influence Internationally. None of the international articles mention Digga D or 1011 by name. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 02:59, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean by Discovery. Do you mean the Discography? That shouldn't be every last single/remix he released under his various names, but the major ones that are put up for charting purposes. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 03:02, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

well I was following the Discography definition which is: all the recordings by a particular musician, composer (= person who writes music), or performerTwoTrappy22 (talk) 23:28, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:ISKCON_Nepal&diff=1000802357&oldid=1000801339 What's your problem? Free speech of 1000's (talk) 20:37, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

See Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:ISKCON Nepal. And it looks like you've been sock blocked. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:21, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

It looks like there are some AFC editors that are willing it keep it around though. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:48, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

• Alialanezi33 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Ali Alanezi (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Alialanezi33 (talk) 18:40, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Can you accept my article please I have provided references Alialanezi333 (talk) 18:51, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:42 AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 19:08, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello AngusWoof, Thank you for the feedback. I am working on a better article. Any other suggestions? Thank you, Bs cool 2009 (talk) 17:07, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:COI and keep in mind that Wikipedia is not about publicizing or promoting your publications. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 18:33, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

AngusWOOF,
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Hi Angus, just wanted to see if you had any updates on the Lolli Page? It's been waiting over three months now and I updated the sources. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft_talk:Lolli_(company) Thanks WaltJsmith (talk) 16:58, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

WaltJsmith, any AFC reviewer can take a look, doesn't have to be me. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 20:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

So, It's just a waiting game to see if someone adds it? Thanks, WaltJsmith (talk) 21:11, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

WaltJsmith, I'm asking folks at the Cryptocurrency wikiproject to take a look. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:15, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Soungs Good, thanks WaltJsmith (talk) 19:14, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

• Gravhaz (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Rockfall barrier (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs
    )

Gravhaz (talk) 18:29, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Gravhaz, please discuss and get consensus with other editors at the talk page for Landslide mitigation. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:34, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Bit confused about the Hero (music producer) article I was writing being declined due to the sources but I suppose I'll just keep working away at it. Would really like to see what you think of this article that I found and started chipping away at. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Roam_(musician).

IronThumb3000 (talk) 14:20, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:MUSICBIO and back it up with news articles from RS websites, major newspapers, or news networks like CBC, then that will help. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 18:58, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

This provides an immense amount of clarity, thank you. Also left some additional notes on it regarding some of the criteria I think it satisfies but I will continue to look for more sources to back it up. IronThumb3000 (talk) 20:03, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello. Recently you rejected the draft Nate Adams (Yo-kai Watch) as it needed to "show notability in influence on other shows". This is the first I've heard of this requirement for fictional characters. Are there any other ways to prove the notability of characters? Cheers, IanTEB (talk) 09:55, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

IanTEB, is the character often compared with other similar characters in other shows. Look at Allen Walker or Eren Yeager for example and their extensive popularity and critical response sections. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:48, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Hm, I might be able to add that. Thanks for the help! IanTEB (talk) 19:02, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi, again. I've now added a paragraph to the reception section covering comparisons that have been drawn from the character. I was wondering if this addresses your concern or if there's still more to improve/fix. Cheers, IanTEB (talk) 11:27, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

• Jenplayswithcars (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Stephan Papadakis (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi there! Thank you for your review and comment. I appreciate all of the work the editors do here and hope to learn to create articles more frequently. I have reviewed and changed some of the language that I thought might be viewed as promotional in tone. Can you please review again and provide further guidance?

Thank you! Jenplayswithcars (talk) 22:15, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Jenplayswithcars, there are still some paragraphs that aren't referenced to anything especially the championship wins. They brag about how he is the only one to do it. Also please help identify secondary sources that cover Papadakis's career that aren't just passing mentions, so not just race results that mention the team brand. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 14:48, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Help

Hi! What can we do to publish this article on wikipedia. It would be great if you can give us some advice on what needs to be changed. All the references have already been attached to the article. It is one of the biggest debating topic in India. Its an engaging article for many people within the country . I would be glad to hear a response from you. Thank You. Draft:Aranthangi Nisha

You need to reference it with reliable sources. Do not cite Times of India. Nisha doesn't seem to meet

WP:ENT, only appearances in reality television contest shows and not a clear winner like with Divya Agarwal. Notice on Divya's article she has coverage from a variety of different sources. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 14:41, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Also, what do you mean by "WE"? You should only have one person use one Wikipedia account. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 14:41, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Help

Please help me to grow my first article Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 20:26, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Hashim Tariq bhat, I found some better sources. Please keep developing it based on the more prominent news articles. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 20:27, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Ohk thank you for your help Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 20:29, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Please help

Please review my Article

When I logged in my account today morning I got this error can you please help me out The provided authentication token is either expired or invalid. Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 04:45, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Hashim Tariq bhat, try clearing the cookies and the cache of your browser? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 05:01, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

I cleared the cookies and the cache but it still shows the same reason Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 05:09, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Mohandmarg Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 14:58, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Neeh help

Hello sir I have a new draft in verification process please help me out to make a complete article Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 14:06, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Mohandmarg

Please edit it Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 14:59, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Please help

Please help me in my recently created Article

Hashim Tariq bhat, please write up a response at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mohand Marg. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 18:37, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft

Neend help in draft:kanz and muhul Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 21:22, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:kanz and muhul

I have added a draft kanz and muhul please help in improving Hashim Tariq bhat (talk) 21:25, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

You recently declined my article, List of Spacex Launches. Why? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.183.212.131 (talk) 00:12, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

71.183.212.131, you need to discuss this at Talk:SpaceX first. You also should not be copy-pasting from existing articles like that without attribution. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:15, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

I gave attribution in the first section, titled attribution. Also, can you review another one of my article, which has already been accepted in to Wikipedia, for C-Class? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.183.212.131 (talk) 11:04, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

71.183.212.131, if it's ready to be reviewed, then resubmit it. Any AFC reviewer can take a look then. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 06:53, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Angus, hope you are doing well. I saw your message here Draft:Talal H. Alsaleem please help me what I can do here as I tried to remove everything that was like promotion and didn't added in the first place. I would really appreciate your help and wisdom. ThanksCara T Williams (talk) 18:31, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:RSP it's not a reliable source. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 18:33, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Woof, thank you so much for your feedback. I closely monitored and patterned both Gabrielle Bernstein and Brene' Brown's Wiki pages so that I could try to include my neutral information as best as possible (ex: publishing my books, working for famous scientists, being interviewed by the media, etc.). The trademark I understand because I just now looked up "Coca-Cola", so thank you! I will work on editing it. I know ThriveGlobal is blacklisted (from my sandbox creation and notification last night). 16 hours spent last night and today down the drain...well, thank you for your feedback! :) Jaclyn

PiscesJNJ (talk) 04:21, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:PROUD, that if there are critics of your work or stuff you'd rather not have publicized but is fairly public knowledge, that may have to be included. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 06:46, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Why are you so heavily copied? First your entire persona as AngusMEOW, now your user page? I can only assume it's tough being popular. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 06:31, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

Cyphoidbomb, wow interesting find! I should probably remove that list. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:28, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello, thanks for your feedback on

Gin (Case Closed). They are major characters in the Case Closed series but don't have enough to warrant their own articles. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 16:09, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I have reverted your manic cleanup tagging of this accepted AfC for Aliza Ayaz, as you were the nominator of a previous deletion request (last result was draftify). See WP:Articles for deletion/Aliza Ayaz. It seems to me that you have a clear conflict-of-interest or other issues here. Perhaps an uninvolved editor or previously-involved administrator should exercise oversight? Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 15:55, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Esowteric, I don't know the person or any of their associations (UCL, UN), so why would I have a conflict of interest? Please see the notes that I have with the tagging. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:54, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Esowteric, also please note I am not AngusMEOW or Angus1986. That was a different editor. The current article has a tone of attributions to UCL that is associated with the subject. It also has peacock verbiage that paints the subject in a positive light. These need to be cleaned up.AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:57, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Yes, I realized later that it wasn't AngusMEOW (he's since changed his username more than once). I'm just rather shocked that you should jump on the article straight after it passed review, having failed to have the article deleted (prior to AngusMEOW's AfD in which he pinged you). Esowteric + Talk + Breadcrumbs 18:02, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

[1] click the link for this bark 142.105.209.171 (talk) 23:00, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Thomas and Friends (series 15). AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 23:47, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Because I want you if you know Thomas the Tank Engine.142.105.209.171 (talk) 19:42, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Perhaphs you didnt check all my sources closley enough. These sources below are all in depth and not interviews. They are mostly in German, but you can use google Translate in Chrome to read them. bluewin.ch landr.com rheintaler.ch fm1today.ch tagblatt.ch Besides, I meet the notability guidelines of

WP:THREE best ones. Also you need to remove ones where they don't mention you, and don't reference the YouTube videos unless they are news media that reference you by name. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 20:03, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Fabian Egger, there are a bunch of references that are coming straight out of Q&A interviews, primary sources and profiles. These need to be taken out for now as they cloud up the notability. The article should be able to stand on secondary sources independent of the subject. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 21:57, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Respected Sir/Mam, I am new contributor in wikipedia and don't know very much about reliable sources . I've read

WP:INCINE for what constitutes reliable or unreliable sources. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 21:46, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello, Just created first article here which is waiting to be approved, so any tips or help massively appreciated as I'm not very tech minded. Cheers JT John T Ghillie (talk) 00:50, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

John T Ghillie, please disclose if you have any association with the firefighter. A lot of the information seems to be coming from press releases that praise him in a good light. You may need someone to clean up the references in the article. They should be to news sources that cover his career, not passing mentions where he speaks a line or two regarding an incident. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 06:49, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

John T Ghillie (talk) 20:58, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Angus: I've read his textbooks that he wrote and followed his training programmes. He has a reputation as an outspoken and controversial firefighter that has publicly voiced opinions that should have been listened to nationally far earlier, especially with respect to Grenfell. As firefighters, our lives are at risk by this blatant act of ignorance and the real visionaries, like Walker should be recognised. This is why I have chosen to create this page. All help is appreciated. JT. John T Ghillie (talk) 20:58, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Angus.... Textbooks in question are used widely as indicated by Amazon Reviews for all textbooks

Also on recommended reading lists from Institution of Fire Engineers a worldwide awarding professional body including in South Africa- see links below - I suggest this has International impact as IFE is a global professional and awarding body

https://www.ife.org.uk/write/MediaUploads/Exams/2019_Recommended_Reading_List.pdf&ved=2ahUKEwjCos3Lv8PuAhXZTxUIHdp7BXMQFjAAegQIAxAC&usg=AOvVaw1eEtgvyVB3nftECs5ERvEI

https://www.scribd.com/document/430168900/Recommended-Reading-List-pdf

Also Walker's textbooks published procurement lists of each UK Fire Service as mandatory reading, this being one example..these are blocked by Wiki (public expenditure?)

Another example off international reach was the responses from global Firefighters to subject (who I follow on LinkedIn) with responses to books and potential new editions from global sources as far as Canada and Argentina including Her Majesty’s Inspector of Fire Services (UK) Dan Stephens Queens Fire Service Medal confirming breadth of use.

As stated, I have read textbooks and followed teachings of Ben Walker and Shan Raffel (Co teacher) for many years and does not seem equal or right that Raffel has a Wikipedia page when Walker, whom Raffel in interview with Fire Magazine (cited) on Raffel's Wikipedia page, personally names Walker as the "Driving force" behind improving fire dynamics and Firefighter knowledge internationally. Whilst both work in tandem frequently it seems like a page for Laurel that omits Hardy- forgive the comedy pun.

Article that declined as citation on warnings of declining Firefighter knowledge of buildings and tactics actually was reposted/linked by subject recently on a LinkedIn forum and is from a respected industry journal "Fire Risk Management Journal" April 2017- can be viewed in depth and context here.

https://www.linkedin.com/posts/benwalker_critical-path-frm-april-2017pdf-activity-6761003730025369600-MkG_

Also - conference coverage that you have questioned was from another industry Journal "Fire Engineering" part of Clarion Publishing USA (formerly Penn Well Group) so not self-published, subject just being interview as international speaker.

Addditional articles such as subject's pre-warning of governmental and Commissioner's denial are from the UK broadsheet newspaper "The Guardian" and are both timely and topical when looked at in context/"timeline as Precedent to Grenfell.

Walker's textbooks are published by Pavilion Media a large UK producer of textbooks for medical and engineering industries, so can't really be considered "self-published", copies are available in British Library and almost every fire department worldwide as stufy materials for IFE exams (required for promotion to Officer levels) in most nations globally in Fire Service.

I appreciate your advice Angus, but struggling to see how we can contribute further without seeking out personal testimonials from Amazonian reviews etc. I found a review of Walker's textbooks in a French magazine which I can send a jpeg of if you like.

All advice appreciated as I would like this page to be up, particularly prior to the end of the Grenfell enquiries as Walker has been one of the very few fire service innovators and visionaries in the UK, who has a body of work and international repute proving that he should be an even more pivotal figure moving forward in the name of public safety and Firefighter skills development.

Can this article be re-reviewed on this basis please?

JT

John T Ghillie, regarding the textbook aspect. I'm just trying to see if there are course pages where they list those textbooks on their syllabus as with other educational / professional institutions. Do not cite Amazon reviews. As for the incidents section, that needs to be clarified where Walker's role in the controversy was. It's not very clear from what was currently written as you cited articles that don't even have his name in it. Also you mention he's a regular subject matter expert on Sky and other major media. Do you have news articles that support that and that aren't coming from his press clippings at his website? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 15:14, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Angus - news commentary re Grenfell and Walker interview as a subject matter expert linked to Russia Today News and their own YouTube channel. As Sky and BBC no longer on iplayer those references removed. Textbooks are linked to recommended reading lists for Institution of Fire Engineers which iss only international awarding aand professional body in Fire Industry and only global organisation. News articles especially re Blaze Rescue, Walker mentioned and interviewed as commanding Officer. Grenfell- Walker's Guardian article-he is referred to at introduction and conclusion of that and as author/expert of journal article "critical path" both pre dated and contradicted statements later made by London Fire Commissioner. Additional links to an additional University thesis heavily citing the textbooks can be added, with regard to personnel trained/fire dept, this could just add literally a list of hundreds of departments and thheir conference attendees, which wouldn't add anything to Wikipedia except back up the notability.... Point taken re Amazon. What do you suggest and are we getting nearer on this?

Fire Rescue industry isn't massive so it's actually rare that a subject such as this will receive this amount of notability.

Trying hard with this- and appreciate your help.

JT

John T Ghillie (talk) 15:24, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Okay, what gives? The movie is real and does exist and has been released and the sources DO support pretty much everything on it so I don't get why you felt this page couldn't be passed. What issues did you have and what needs to be corrected? I am offended and disappointed so please enlighten me. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 06:12, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

DevonteHuntley, please read my comments on that draft article. You need to expand on the reception given to the film. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 06:43, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

What reception exactly? You need to be more specific because I don't understand. All I am reading is that the sources aren't reliable, but the sources support the movie. I mean, anyone can google it and see that it exists so having faulty sources isn't a reason to dismiss the whole page on an official movie that is right as far as release, actors, plot, etc. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 07:20, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

DevonteHuntley, check the Reception section. You just list a bunch of newspapers. You're not describing what the critics are saying about the film in detail such as with the original Grizzly (film)#Reception AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 08:33, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

That's why you declined the page? I mean, you still could have approved it and just told me to remove it, or you could have done that. I'll look it over and see what I can do. So if that gets fixed, then the page can be re-summitted for approval? - DevonteHuntley (talk) 21:42, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Okay, so I went through the section and noticed it provided no reception. I should have checked this, but just so you know I did not make this and simply copied-and-pasted what was on the Grizzly page regarding the sequel that some one did not even bother making page for and just slapped it on the first movie's page, hence me making one. Anyway, I trimmed down most of the sources in the paragraph that I didn't think was needed and moved the remaining portion to the RELEASE section, so the Reception section has been removed and no longer there. Check it out, hopefully it's a lot better. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 22:00, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

DevonteHuntley, can you add back the reception section but take 2-3 notable critics' reviews from major papers and detail that? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 22:12, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Were there any in the section that you know of? If so I'll have to go back to the archives to retrieve them now. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 22:14, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Okay, I just added a couple in so far. How do you like them? - DevonteHuntley (talk) 22:42, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

DevonteHuntley, yeah, looks better! AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:00, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Okay, I just re-submitted it so hopefully it gets approved this time! - DevonteHuntley (talk) 00:02, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Feel free to add more reception and also how it fared at the festivals. Did it win any notable awards? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:05, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

I'll find more reviews to add. I'm not sure of any rewards, I can't imagine it earning any given how incomplete and bad this is, but I'll look out for those too. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 22:24, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

I'm trying to get the redirect removed. That it has over 10 reviews from newspapers/major news websites all over helps. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 19:04, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so much for the page approval! I'm glad I was able to fix what needed to be fix and now it's there officially and can be tweaked and touched up by other users as needed. My first page too. - DevonteHuntley (talk) 21:39, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi AngusWOOF, You recently declined the Josh Gruss page. I'm working on improvements as I think this person is viable and credible and should have their own wiki page. If you don't mind to explain when I update is there anything I should delete or keep so you can see the improvements and leave to be approved? Thank you! ADHP2021 (talk) 21:31, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

ADHP2021, you need to find secondary news source articles that focus on Gruss separate from Round Hill, otherwise it should be a redirect to Round Hill. Do not cite press releases or routine news announcements. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 22:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so much! Also once I'm ready should I have you proof or just re-submit? Also do I take your citations off? Thank you! ADHP2021 (talk) 22:33, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

ADHP2021, you can resubmit. Any AFC reviewer can look it over then. But don't remove the existing AFC reviewer comments. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 00:26, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ADHP2021 (talk • contribs) 03:41, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

The article

reliable source

that directly supports material in the article.

If you created the article, please don't be offended. Instead, consider improving the article. For help on inserting references, see

Abdotorg, I cancelled this prod and restored the redirect. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 15:22, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Angus- suggestions made as required- links such as Walker being interviewed on Russia Today NEws re Grenfell on their Youtube channel. As SKY/BBC stuff no longer on their iplayer- that has been removed.

Some sources removed where not directly mentioned- but industry journals and presenter interviews are not "primary" and are from respected and long established industry journals.

Regarding use of Walker's textbooks, would a long list of departments- whose personnel and trainers have attended his conferences add worth and also painful to verify/check for you - who was there, where when at literally dozens of conferences.... The Institution of Fire Engineers' (have their own Wikipedia page) are the only international organisation and awarding body in firefighting industry and link/citation to their reading list containing Walker's textbooks provided as citation- will this suffice as their membership and those undertaking examinations and using said reading lists are global.

With regard to controversy- whilst perhaps not reported as national news, it has been pointed out within the fire industry extensively that messages Walker's 2016 Guardian article "Firefighter Training Cuts" etc and his Fire Risk Management Journal Article in April 2017 about Firefighters not being adequately prepared in building and construction knowledge and use in firefighting operations both pre-dated Grenfell and stood in contrast with the then Commissioner's stance that there was no predictions or precedence. The Grenfell Inquiry did not mention this, despite industry pressure from Firefighters. Textbooks, established journal article and a broadsheet newspaper article that directly warned of factors that became applicable/exposed in Grenfell is noteworthy in itself.

I thank you once again for your guidance and hope we are getting nearer. For reasons above, it would be timely if this was approved prior to the Grenfell Inquiry resuming for the wider fire and public safety benefit.

JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 15:40, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JT

Hi Angus,

        Also got sent this academic degree paper link from University of Central Lancashire which was authored by the Head of live firefighting Training- Chris Tyler for South Yorkshire Fire Rescue Service (UK) which is used extensively as a basis for uk firefighting tactics and also cites Walker as the subject matter expert as well as references https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ag30i5aPI3G-OuiIZjsr6myf7jUhJgkP [1]

Hope this helps, JT John T Ghillie (talk) 16:03, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 16:03, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

John T Ghillie, Google drive page seems to be private or requires google login, but the other page where you listed his textbook is good. Can you help clean up the controversy section? AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 16:30, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

HI Angus- thanks for this- what do you need for Controversy clean-up on this- more context such as "discussed within firefighting industry but not picked up by wider media"? I will re-ask Chris Tyler for a copy of that thesis if required- should I email it to you if I download- or any other way to make available to you?

JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 16:33, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 16:33, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

HI Angus- I got the original pdf sent by the author Chris from his academic paper- should I email it to you? Or see if the google drive can be unlocked? John T Ghillie (talk) 16:37, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 16:37, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Got link re-sent and should be publicly available https://drive.google.com/file/d/10tNFBg-q5OGCTExBHftD0lmXtC9lyOM1/view?usp=sharing John T Ghillie (talk) 16:40, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 16:40, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

John T Ghillie, it should be from stuff that's publicly available, not emailed or instant messaged to you or me, so newspapers, magazines, websites would suffice. The controversy section needs some cleanup to show his role in the events, like if he wrote some critiques in the Guardian and then others responded with more published articles, that would work. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 16:56, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

John T Ghillie, I shortened the FDIC section. Comments from random attendees like David from the On Target Prep website doesn't really carry as much weight, but at least it confirms he was the keynote speaker. If some of the writers from the magazines gave a detailed critique on his presentation then that can be mentioned by name, magazine, and description, much like a review for a film. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 16:59, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Angus- after discussing the concepts of that article on a private fire group- in light of me mentioning that I had been talking of it- it's been reposted by a fire professional online- who is not the author Chris Tyler; obviously Walker is extensively mentioned within.

https://www.linkedin.com/posts/billy-khatib-gifiree-gradiosh-8788282b_httpslnkdind5tqtcx-activity-6761331957780504576-j8Tc

Hope this helps

John T Ghillie (talk) 17:23, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 17:23, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Just want to say thank you for your edits and help Angus John T Ghillie (talk) 17:27, 30 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 17:27, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Angus- found and added some links to national awards Walker was nominated for and won- with relevant citations- not sure whether I've properly submitted though- can you advise please? John T Ghillie (talk) 12:28, 31 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 12:28, 31 January 2021 (UTC) I'd like to get this online prior to recommencement of Grenfell Inquiry as fear Fire Service will repeat same mistakes by ignoring this type of work and information such as that which Walker has consistently promoted for 20 years. John T Ghillie (talk) 12:32, 31 January 2021 (UTC)JTJohn T Ghillie (talk) 12:32, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

WP:PROUD. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff

) 15:20, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Thanks Angus. JT John T Ghillie (talk) 21:31, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

@AngusWOOF: Hi, would appreciate your reply in regards to

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

May I know, what you meant by "not adequately supported by reliable sources" because as far as I'm aware of as per

In case there's some misunderstand, I'm just confused about why it's considered "not adequately supported by reliable sources" because I often use majority of website included inside the draft.

Note: This discussion is about the quoted text (ignore the heading), I don't care about the Draft getting rejected. — Paper9oll (📣 • 📝) 04:26, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

Paper9oll, see response on that talk page. AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:26, 31 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi AngusWOOF, you very recently merged some drafts into