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Please can you explain this tagging. It makes no sense to me. - Sitush (talk) 07:27, 22 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ah Okay! The tag introduced by me to the article was about clean-up, reorganize, removing unsourced claim/an opinion someone desperately wants to be true. The line, Maithils brahmins are one of the two chief divisions of brahmins is baseless asreference cited doesn't support this claim. No results found in reference cited for the 'chief divisions of brahmins'

The lead section highlights the title, Maithil brahmins, but as it goes to description into history section, it cites the contribution/work of Maithils, not Maithil brahmins who inhabited the former kingdom of Mithila(Not all Maithils are Maithil brahmins). Again, The Maharajah of Darbhanga Raj, a neighbouring state doesn't match any texts of the bookEthnology cited as reference.

Later, The unknown maharajah of Darbhanga raj presided over their caste association, Whom and what caste association? Actually he presided over the Maithil Mahasabha and it was an orthodox group not a caste Association(accordingly reference provided)..

I invite you to reorganize the texts of article accordingly references available or put the maintenance tag back.

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Could you explain the reason behind your reorganize tag on this page? I'd be happy to improve it, but I don't know what specifically you were referring to. Geo47 (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ah sure! The

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Oh, I understand now. Thanks for the reformatting. I just made some grammar fixes but they're minor. Also, I've never seen candidate names italicized before (as in the discussion of the candidates he's defeated). Is that the proper formatting?Geo47 (talk) 00:30, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Um, I'm not sure. Actually I've no idea. As those names (probably) are still waiting to fall under wiki notability guideline, for articles to be created, placing them inside boxes, highlights red, something not so cool. Whether they should be italicize or mark bold or left natural, as they are defeated candidates doesn't sound legit. It is not about them, but an another person whom they contested with. I'm leaving it up to you, whatever goes more real with wiki projects. I've seen some articles where candidates name were italicized, not sure whether they were appropriate or looking for an edit. And an another thing, have you some source regarding, Kouchi's marriage status? I noticed you changed 'was' to 'is'. Are you sure he's still into marriage not divorced? The source says, 'Ron and his wife, the former Joy Tanimoto, have two sons'. Cheers!

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Oh, I see. Thanks for the explanation. And yes, the source is his campaign website. In English, the word "former" before a wife's name simply means that she was formerly known as Joy Tanimoto before she replaced her maiden name with her husband's name (Kouchi). Geo47 (talk) 15:49, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Damn! I apologize for my misconception of the word, 'former'. You might would like to pay a visit tothis linklink2, which says, 'Senator Kouchi graduated from Waimea High School in 1975 and attended Drake University in Des Monies, Iowa.' contradicting to 'Kouchi received his high school diploma from Waimea High School and his Bachelor's degree from Drake University (in Des Moines,Iowa).' High School diploma is not

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Actually it's the other way around, but that's actually a good point that I didn't catch. It says he received his high school diploma which means that he graduated from high school. However, in both sources, it says that he only attended Drake University which, to me, implies that he didn't graduate (or else they would have said "graduated from Drake" or "received his Bachelor's from Drake". We can't know for sure, so I'll go make the change to your original wording now. Nice catch!Geo47 (talk) 08:32, 28 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• This is a good topic to work, I am unsure about the title. --Tito☸Dutta 06:27, 3 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah it sure is. I've been thinking about title, thought Ashoka and his Dhamma would be more appropriate and real than present one(with rectified typo 'Dhama').

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Thanks! You just reverted my edit again. Citing one of the sources is not reliable. Please delete the respective unreliable source, why the other one? Explain? It might be a human error.

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(edit conflict) AnSI is not usually thought to be reliable because it just takes huge chunks from old Raj books - it was a political exercise and the level of scholarship was generally appalling. However, I cannot see the page that you have just cited and would appreciate some more info about that one. - Sitush (talk) 16:23, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

here it is, pg.282.

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I cannot see that (User:Sitush/Common#GBooks may explain why). That AnSI source is mostly just a list of names, linked to when a name occurred in a census, even if it was wrongly spelled or wehatever. Raj censuses were not reliable and in any event it is not enough to source that x, y or z appears in a source - the source has to discuss them, give them some sort of meaningful coverage etc. - Sitush (talk) 16:31, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, and just in case you are doing this - snippet views are not acceptable. A lot of people try to us them and they very frequently take things out of context. Can you possibly quote the relevant paragraphs from the book? It is unlikely to be very long. - Sitush (talk) 16:34, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It might be just a list but if reliable, should be kept. Yeah the url of the respective page has kind of fragment view. And, perhaps we can not(or should not) ignore the book tagging 'Gbook'. It's a real book. If snippet view makes a change, then books should be cited without the url? There would be no question anymore thereafter, I guess. [1],[2]. Please have a look at them, meanwhile I dig more. Update the ref serction of the article, if they are

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There are some more reliable sources, but the online preview is not available. Like, 1, 2. I do not think it should a reason for not citing them. If it could be one, then tons of other articles should be get deleted along with this one.

WP:OSE. And I suggest that you read the opening nomination at the AfD before sending us off to see search results for "chadhar surname" on Google. - Sitush (talk) 18:14, 11 September 2013 (UTC)[reply

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Ah! Thank you very much! You're talking about an AfD, what we already are doinghere. It would be perhaps much better If we discuss one thing at one place.

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1. the links you have put in do not necessarily go where you intend . For example,
   liberality redirects to Liberalism. which is a different political concept. Our article on harmony
   is exclusively about music-- please check all your current links.
2. Additional links are needed for other words at the first occurrences. TAll names of people and places need to be linked
3. The article is written as an essay, not an encyclopedia article. The tone needs to be mroe formal: we usuall omit connecting phrases "To understand the various aspects of the policy of Dhamma and the reasons for its formulation it would necessarily need to sketch the historical background against which it became possible for Ashoka to enunciate it." does not really add anything: the heading you use "Historical background" says it by itself.
4. We do not use FULL CAPITALS in articles for headings.
5. The contents of the article iss overwhelming positive, as if it were meant to promote his vision of society. Surely there is some negative or less partisan commentary also.
6. We already have an article on Edicts of Ashoka. It may need to be expanded.
7. The section, text of the edicts is unclear--which particualar inscription is it, or is it a synthesis of multiple inscriptions? DGG ( talk ) 14:57, 9 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I left you a msg on your talk page related to the problem specific. And about the other concerns listed, are as follow:

1. Yesterday I made an attempt to fix 95 dab errors pointed by 'DPL bot' using dab solver. It seems, there's still some error(s) exist and need to be fixed manually. Thanks for bringing it up, I'll try rectifying.
2. Regarding this one, I'm wondering if there's some bot fixing up this kind of thing. It is kind of time consuming, I'll do it though once I get time enough.
3. And yeah some lines need to be removed, or re-written as per
   Wikipedia style of writing
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4. Um, I'm sorry but I didn't get it exactly, what do you mean by, 'FULL CAPITALS IN HEADING'? Let me guess, For eg. There's a heading 'Dhamma causes', another 'Contents of Dhamma'. Do you want me to re-write 'Contents of Dhamma' as 'Contents of dhamma'?
5. The negative aspect never grown enough to be written by authors/historians. There's no reference(s) available regarding this perspective. However, there were few concerns and I tried to sum them up. As the policy faced reluctance from a particular sector of society, called Brahmin class, as the policy talks about abolition of sacrifices. And few more.
6. The article
   Mauryan empire. Ashoka used medium of Edicts to propagate his, this policy. The article 'Edicts of Ashoka' has its own imperfection. The article relies on minimal references, and the article Edicts of Ashoka, interprets that Ashoka used medium of Edicts to propagate the idea of Buddhism. Yesterday I left a msg on the talk page of article seeking need to re-write the article. I'll do it my own, once I get time enough to do it. The article Edicts of Ashoka is a part of the articleAshoka's policy of Dhamma, and it is notable enough to have it, its own article. for 'Edicts of Ashoka', Edicts of Ashoka, Google books search result,Search result for 'Ashoka's policy of Dhamma,Ashoka's policy of Dhamma, Google books search result
   . It would be kind of tedious to put both article into one.
7. The section, 'Text of edicts' has inline citation(s), One seeking more info. regarding texts could dig the reference(s) cited. I didn't wanted to enlarge the size of the article any bigger.
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Please can you rewrite

Actually, I've just noticed that you have even spelled the name wrongly throughout and that is despite me only recently pointing out your error regarding that in relation to the Chadhar AfD. We already have Chandler (surname) and that is where any content that survives your clean up should go. - Sitush (talk) 18:23, 11 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Did you read both articles? i.e.

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Do you know what? I was going to help you out because you clearly have some competence issues and I thought that I could assist you through the maze that is Wikipedia. But not after your latest replies, sorry. I know a lost cause when I see one. -Sitush (talk) 20:07, 12 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No, you were not. You were kind of stalking me. You're actually comparing a disambiguation page and an article page. You might, would like to read

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I have restored this article; please do not play around with CSD tags if you don't know how to use them. GiantSnowman 14:11, 12 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The present article was created under a typo errored title, 'Ashoka's policy of dhama' (It should be dhamma). I asked it peoples at #en.wikipedia Irc channel regarding renaming the title of the article. They suggested me to read

Dear Anupmehra, Thank you for reviewing the page. You state that in the Ralph Nevins page there are not reliable source as coverage in news or magazine. This is what I exactly did before submitting. I added two reference to the "ASHRAE Journal" and to a book. There are more reliable sources than just news. Moreover, the subject of the article died many years ago, where it is difficult to find digital records of news and magazines. The book is an independent and reliable source. Best, Stefano — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stefano Schiavon (talk • contribs) 14:57, 18 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! Perhaps you are talking about

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Thank you for taking your time to evaluate the creation of the article on the International Federation of Pedestrians. My submission referenced above was rejected by you with the following comment: "It requires additional reliable sources to verify the content of the submission. The section Mission should be re-written in compliance with Wikipedia neutral point of view.". The Mission of the organization by definition is not a NPV - this section just states in a neutral and factual way, what is the Mission of the organization. How should I proceed with this - many articles on organizations (NGOs for example) in wikipedia do state what is the Mission of each of those organizations. Considering the lack of reliable sources: the article already cites four reputable International Organizations as sources: Union of International Associations, The Pedestrian and Bicycle Information Center (PBIC), the Alliance of NGOs for Road Safety and Walk21, also cites "Google Scholar" and "Google Books". When it will be considered enough? Thank you. Mario J Alves (talk) 09:02, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, The submission heavily relies on the primary/affiliated sources(4 out of 7 sources are, website). Reference no.3 cited in the history section is the google books search result, You need to cite the particular book and the page no.(s) which support the content of the submission. Reference no.4 cited, again in the history section is aa book, but it doesn't verifies the content of the submission, as there's no page no. mentioned, It doesn't either have a preview to perform verification. Similarly the Mission section deals with aim of IFP, but the only reference(againprimary source) cited, states visions/principles of International Charter of Walking, it doesn't say a thing about IFP, like IFP promotes or supports the visions of ICW as claim made in the article. Wikipedia requires

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Thank you for looking through it, and I look forward to your feedback! — Precedingunsigned comment added by CN Times Books (talk •contribs) 12:18, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! The

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Thanks again, J. — Preceding unsigned comment added byJavier.salado (talk • contribs) 12:44, 20 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Anup, thank you for your comments. I have rephrased some of the content to have a more neutral point of view. Regarding the references of the sections you mention, there are not many references besides the published articles about this particular application and the documentation and website of the application itself. I have added these references to those sections. they are definitely verifiable, another thing is what you, or other reviewers, may think of their reliability. In my humble opinion a reference to the source is very reliable. I'll wait for your comments and re-submit for revision shortly — Preceding unsigned comment added by Javier.salado (talk • contribs) 13:53, 24 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Have a nice day :) — Preceding unsigned comment added byWriterwrench (talk • contribs) 02:09, 21 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Thanks for your comment on https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/David_G._Benner&oldid=573886411/..... Am looking back into my prep notes to write the reference(s) you suggest. JaneFaber (talk) 20:46, 21 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Style guides aren't crystal clear on how to cite a CV printout and same CV data online in a format acceptable for WP text. Chicago Manual of Style and other standard sources didn't help but APA style was recommended by the "Ask A Librarian" site. So will add that reference plus others, and more Wikilinks. Extra research routes you gave are good to know. JaneFaber (talk) 07:08, 24 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, could you please help me understand specific examples of issues with references so I could fix it. Also is there any time-frame before which I need to resolve the identified issues or as long as article is improved on continuous basis it should be fine... thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added byGoagar (talk • contribs) 18:17, 22 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Please find below the url for my article- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Goagar/sandbox

Also I have taken care of two issues below. Could you please let me know if it looks OK now or needs further improvement?

Comment: Wikipedia is not considered a reliable source. Better directly use the sources listed to support the particular content.

"In 2009, Neev raised $500,000 from Basil Partners, a venture capital fund focused on opportunities in SMEs catering to IT/ITeS and technology sectors. The fund primarily invests in Indian/Asian companies that seek to expand into global markets or US/European companies that have an India/Asia centric offshore-based model." seems to be copy-pasted from here. Please re-write them.

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 19:39, 22 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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https://hasgeek.tv/jsfoo/2013-1/681-using-camera-motion-detection-in-js-for-gestures-based-interaction

Appreciate all your feedback so far on this article.

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 16:58, 23 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Anup, got it..will work on this point and revert back to you. Thanks!! — Precedingunsigned comment added by Goagar (talk •contribs) 04:10, 24 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anup, I have found some additional sources from CNBC and Amazon. Could you please advise if these could considered as reliable published?

This is from CNBC TV, Rajeev Suri: http://thoughtleadership-guru.blogspot.in/2012/08/saurabh-chandra-neev-technologies.html

This was created by Amazon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7QlmnrTK3Q&feature=player_embedded

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 10:24, 26 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 10:12, 27 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anup,

I could not find the direct link for CNBC one. This video was created and posted on Rajeev Suri's YT channel and there is no other known source. Rajeev was a CNBC Young Turk.

Just wanted to check if it would be appropriate to re-submit the article with higher probability of creation with the Amazon reference ?

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 14:28, 3 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anup, Appreciate if you could provide some inputs / directions on my above questions so I can work on the next steps.

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Goagar(talk • contribs) 17:13, 5 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anup, I have added references in the article. Could you review once and provide feedback? Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added byGoagar (talk • contribs) 10:10, 11 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Anup, I have made some additional improvements, added references and open source contributions made by Neev Technologies. I have re-submitted the article. Could you review and provide feedback?

Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added byGoagar (talk • contribs) 06:56, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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What were the citation errors have you find, & what type of references is required for this page could you please,describe in detail & help me out to improve this page. — Preceding unsignedcomment added by Sbmurmu09 (talk • contribs) 13:47, 24 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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I have edited and resubmitted the proposed article for creation referenced in the subject line (LICADHO).

Your points re not establishing notoriety were well taken. In the initial section, I added several mentions (with citations) of the organization's prominence - citations in local media, citations in the international media, op-eds written by LICADHO's director, etc. Hopefully this is sufficient.

In terms of the background info about LICADHO, I kept most of the sourcing as LICADHO's own page. This is because it's fairly mundane stuff - where they work, how many offices they have, etc. This sort of info is mostly easily gleaned from the organization's own page. Hopefully this is sufficient for publication. There may be more out there, but a lot of it is in Khmer and is difficult to cite.

Link here:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Cambodian_League_for_the_Promotion_and_Defense_of_Human_Rights_%28LICADHO%29

(apologies - I may have submitted it twice) — Precedingunsigned comment added by 197.237.89.130 (talk) 12:58, 25 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

hello. i have questions about your review of the sci fi summer con atlanta article. there were 2 messages in the review, one that the sources werent good enough, and two that i needed to cite sources in the article itself not just in the reference section. is that correct?? the sources i gave point to exactly information that i described, so how are they not reliable references? and, why do i need to cite sources in the body text if i fill out the reference section?? isnt that the point of a reference section?? so, i have trouble right now understanding what or why the reference problems were described, so i need help with that. thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by209.179.85.129 (talk) 16:59, 25 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Articles must be notable as per

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Dear editor, You mentioned that my article on the Holy Incense, User:Davidbena/draft article on Holy Incense , was rejected because it sounded more like an essay than an article fit for an encyclopedia. In this assessment, you may be right. May I kindly ask you, though, to give me a brief example of how I can change the current style into a style that you are looking for. I will re-edit the entire work and after I have met your criteria I will re-submit the article. I only need an example to follow, so that I will know specifically how to improve the article.

Were there any aspects of the article which are good and acceptable, or is the style completely unacceptable and needs rewriting?Davidbena (talk) 17:31, 26 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Antoine — Preceding unsigned comment added by88.172.132.124 (talk) 19:46, 26 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be happy to help but I need a link to the article first, please?

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What would your other suggestions be? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fmnod (talk • contribs) 00:20, 27 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Pete_%26_Gerry%27s_Organic_Eggs#Pete_.26_Gerry.27s_Organics — Preceding unsigned comment added by76.97.70.52 (talk) 18:49, 27 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Find sources: Google (books · news · scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL and see

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Hi -- regarding this rejected article ... My friend (and, in the interest of full disclosure, fellow co-founder of the defunct company whose tech product is a progenitor of widely used systems today) had a fairly to-the-point article (I felt) which you rejected on the grounds that it read like an advertisement. The company is no longer in business, and only a 15+ year old version of the product is available for people to use. The issue might be that I personally added a link to one (the only? I don't know) company offering subscription service to the product any more. Is this the issue, or would it suffice to add more information on the product's functionality and how it is compared to modern systems such as Siri and Google Voice? Thanks in advance. DulcetTone (talk) 01:45, 13 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Can you explain why you find that sentence is not neutral? The product is still available from that supplier, and I am not aware of others. If you find that portion of the article is somehow promotional, I think it would be easy to remove it or make it less specific by omitting the one provider we know of. Thanks in advance for any more information on your finding. edit: oh and I will read the NPOV article, too... perhaps I'm guilty of not being proactive with the information you've already provided.DulcetTone (talk) 19:18, 18 October 2013 (UTC

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Hi Anup Ji ! Hope you are doing well. I need your help in my article[Career Institute]. I have been waiting for comments from NawlinWiki but no response. Please guide me weather I need to edit the text for improvement.

Waiting in anticipation for your response.

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You reviewed my first page for creation in September (Instant - Company). I did make a few changes as you suggested. Do you think the changes are sufficient? I'm waiting for another review, but in the meantime I would like to make sure that everything is correct. Many Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added byWednesday2013 (talk • contribs) 07:13, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Anup, recently you reviewed my document regarding Erika Winters Bio, Ive been struggling to get the document posted but keeps on being rejected despite the changes made using the on line librarian help. I do truly need support in order to identify which parts should I take out or change. Any specific guidance will be truly appreciated. Thanks for the support Daniel --Levana2013 (talk) 16:07, 30 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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