User talk:Banga96792

Eng 22 Class Page

See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22

Welcome

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Hello, Banga96792, and

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1st draft comments

I removed the headline from the first section. For wikipedia, the first section (intro) has no heading. See
Wikipedia:Lead_section
for details.

For the second section, remove the beginning quote ("Mom, why..."). You need to write the article like an encyclopedia entry. For quidelines, see this link on Wikipedia:Good article criteria.

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 19:07, 10 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]